MrsL Posted July 26, 2009 Report Share Posted July 26, 2009 (edited) I may not comment on every chapter but I can assure you that I AM reading every chapter I know this is soapland but I think I would have liked it to have been just a little more difficult for him to get out but its just my opinion and Im liking this, so, more please.. Edited July 26, 2009 by MrsL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 That was a great chapter. Jai's comment when he woke up was funny. Aden saved the day Can't wait for more. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Righto, so I just read this fic from the beginning and I absolutely love it. I'm so glad that you brought Dom back into it. There's only one other fic that I've read with Dom in it, so it's a great welcome change, and you write it brilliantly! So glad that they finally found Belle, but now the cops are going to send Aden back to jail, with probably a higher sentence for breaking out! That is, unless Dom confesses... Cannot wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Love it Xxxxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 That was really good, again. I liked the last scene with Belle and Aden. Good news about Geoff and I liked Miles in that chapter, too. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 That was another very good chapter. I really liked everything that happened in the first scene. Aden's free You had me worried there for a while that they were going to send him back to prison, though. Can't wait to see what's coming up next. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrsL Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Aden is free which is good-I thought you were sending him back to jail. Looking forward to seeing what happens next Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 That was a really good last chapter. I really enjoyed it. I like how you wrapped everything up with Irene coming back. I liked the humour in it all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jdoddy Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 Just read through the whole thing.. awesome work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrsL Posted August 5, 2009 Report Share Posted August 5, 2009 I really liked this and sad its finished so soon. Thank you Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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