smokinace Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 CHAPTER 8 Toby was sitting outside the carridge when he saw Nicole walking up. "hey, i just got verbaly abused by a girl who said you were hers" Nicole said Toby sighed "Come on, come with me" he said "where are we going?" Nicole asked "Was she blonde and wore really nice clothes for a girl who ,lives on the streets" "Yes, who is she" "Her names is Hanna Goldfrapp, she used to live in the carridge with me but i kicked her out for reasons you don't need to know" They stopped in an allyway and he bangong on a door It opened, Hanna stood in the doorway. "I knew you'd crawl back to me, but i didn't think she'd be here" Hanna said smiling Toby hit her across the face "Stay away from me and Nicole, you got that and you can wipe that grin off your face" "I'll be making sure Mickey hears about this?" CHAPTER 9 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Ooh.Jury's out on whether Toby's got temper problems or the girl deserved it but either way I suspect that's not the end of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 CHAPTER 9 Nicole walked up to the carridge and let herself in. she could Toby playing guitar singing to himself softly "I'm a cold heartbreaker Fit ta burn and I'll rip your heart in two An I'll leave you lyin' on the bed with your ass in the air I'll be out the door before ya wake It's nuthin' new ta you 'Cause I think *we've seen that movie too 'Cause you could be mine But you're way out of line With your ***** slap rappin' And your cocaine tongue You get nuthin' done I said you could be mine" He stopped once he saw her "How long have you been there?" he asked "Not that long, is that your own song?" she replied "What?, hello no, it's Guns 'n' Roses girl" he told her "You've never heard of Guns 'n' Roses?" He asked where'd you get the guitar from?" she asked "I stole it" He replied "Why do you think i'm here?" she asked He took a deep breath "Dunno?" he said putting the guitar aside and laying down. she climbed on top of him and started to undo his belt "Wait" he said grabbing her hand "Are you sure about this" he asked "What is this your first time?" she said and smiled He shook his head "Second" he told her She took off the unbuttoned shirt he wore over his tshirt and then his t shirt and then took her own top off. CHAPTER 10 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 (This chapter is set a few weeks after chapter 9) CHAPTER 10 Nicole walked up to the carridge where Toby was sitting outside in the sun He looked at her and quickly jumped up. "Hey i got something for you" he said "We need to talk" Nicole told him "Sure, what's wrong?" he said She took a deep breath "I'm pregnant" she said He stopped "oh, ok, um, congr..." "It's yours" she cut him off "What?, Nic i'm 16 is knocking up a 17 year old even possible" "Well iit happened, didn't it" "How do you know it's not Geoff's" "Geoff doesn't believe in sex before marrige" "Hey Cassidy" they heard a voice yell. "I heard you hit my little sister" it was Mickey "It was a warning to stay away from me" he told Mickey "Well consider this a warning" Mickey replied and punch him in the face then kicked him so he was on his stomach "Get him up" Mickey said to his friens that were there He grabbed a whip that he had and whiped him several times on the back, then his friends let him go. "Next time blondie here gets it" Nicole tried to help him but he pushed her away "Come on you need to go to the hospital" she said CHAPTER 11 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Woah, some nice twists there.Toby certainly seems to be taking a lot of physical punishment.Looking forward to seeing where you take this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 CHAPTER 11 Nicole stood in the doorway of the hospital room "Rachel said you're going to be fine" Nicole said "I was whipped, hardly life theatning, she did tell me to lay on my stomach though" Toby replied "So why are you on your back?" she asked "I'm not one to follow orders" hrre told her sitting up sowly Nicole walked to the bed and sat down. "We didn't get to finish our conversation" she said "Hey, whatever you wanna do, i'll supprt you ok, i'm here if you wanna keep it that's fine. I don't know what kind of dad i'll be..." she cut him off "You are the sweetest guy" she said "I know" he replied "And if you think we'll make a good family then i'll have this baby" she told him Toby smiled and kissed her. his smile reminded her of a young boy excited over a present on christmas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Glad he's okay, looking forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Gd updates, Is Nic still with Geoff? Im confused lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted July 1, 2009 Report Share Posted July 1, 2009 Awww Love it <3 Cant wait 4 more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 3, 2009 Report Share Posted July 3, 2009 CHAPTER 12 Toby woke up in hospital and saw Roman standing next to him. "I'm not gonna pretend i'm happy about you and Nicole's situation, especially that fact that she's not long broken up with Geoff" Roman said "Mr Harris" Toby started to say "And Nic said you told you are going to support her and the baby, i just wanna know how, seeing you are a street kid and all" "I plan on getting a job" Toby said "With no education, Toby that is going to be hard" Roman told him "I know" Toby replied "And you shouldn't really be living where you are, yoou can stay at my place" "When you get dichaged i'll take you home, but on one condition" "What's that" Toby asked "You work for me at the diner" "Thanks, me Ha..." "And call me Roman" CHAPTER 13 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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