tessalove Posted July 9, 2009 Report Share Posted July 9, 2009 Liked it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 CHAPTER 17 Toby walked down stairs and opened the door just as Natalie was about to knock. "Oh hey" Natalie said "Nicole's not home, she's at school" Toby said shutting the door. "Actually i came to talk to you" She replied. "What insulting thing have you got to say to me today" Toby said "I just wanna get to known the father of my daughters child" Natalie told him Toby took a deep breath "Where are you going?" she asked "To the diner, i promised Irene and Roman i'd help out during lunch" Toby told her "If it's money you need..." Toby stopped walking "What's that suppost to mean?" "I mean your just a child yourself, you have no experience on raising children and how can you support Nicole and the bay" "My mother died giving birth to me, my father was a drunk and died when i was twelve. So don't tell me that i can't look after people. And for the record i am not a child. I think i'll walk" Toby yelled CHAPTER 18 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Still interesting, this story is developing nicely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 13, 2009 Report Share Posted July 13, 2009 Natalies really getting on my nerves LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 CHAPTER 18 Toby and Nicole were sitting on the couch weatching tv "I heard mum said something to you today" Nicole said Toby sat there silent "What's up are you ok" Nicole asked "I've been lying to you since the day we met" Toby told her Nicole frowned "About what?" she asaked "My mum and dad aren't dead" Toby said "But you said..." "I know what i said" "I don't get along with them so i thought it would be easier if i told you they were dead" Toby told her "Why don't you get along" Nicole asked "Touchy subject" Toby said standing up she grabbed hiss hand and pulled him back down into a seated position "I think i deserve an answer" "And i'll tell you just not tonight" Nicole looked at him. "Things aren't ok in Toby city ok there som stuff i have to sort out first" he told me "Then why did you tell me" "Because i don't there to be lies between us" CHAPTER 19 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Hmm, interesting, wonder what Toby's story is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 Cool!! Cant wait to find out more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmmaJane123 Posted July 14, 2009 Report Share Posted July 14, 2009 OOo Interesting, what toby`s story??? Cant wait 4 more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smokinace Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 CHAPTER 19 Toby was sitting by himself at the diner. "Hi, my name's Indigo. I'm new in town" Indigo said standing next to him. "Hi" he replied "I'm sorry i noticed a really cute guy and well i don't normally hit on guy that i notice across the room" she told him "I'm actually waiting for someone" he told her "So you're interested in a hot blonde" she joked "I actually have a girlfriend, who is a hot blonde" Toby replied "Hey sorry i'm late" Nicole interupted Indigo noticed Nicole wearing a school dress. "A school girl" she said and smiled and walked away "Who was that?" Nicole asked "Indigo or something, anyway mums not here yet" Toby said "So who should i look for?" Nicole asked "A blonde 51 year old who acts and dresses like she's 16" Toby replied "Then she's here" Nicole said CHAPTER 20 UP SOON Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tessalove Posted July 18, 2009 Report Share Posted July 18, 2009 LOL liked it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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