KaiyaBlake Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 (edited) That was so beautiful Jack was there to protect her!!!!!!!! Really sad though, but still. I love the idea of it I have no other words, it was amazing! Edited February 13, 2009 by KaiyaBlake Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Zoe~ Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 That was good Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Barbara Posted February 13, 2009 Report Share Posted February 13, 2009 This was very well-written. Great job Moya. That's exactly the reason why I would never walk in a dark alleyway alone at night. *shudders* Thank God Jack, the angel, was walking with Martha, even though she didn't know. He'll always protect her. My favourite part: "I love you Jack, she whispered silently, mouthing the words, and then, in the reflection, saw him nod at her, with that familiar look of pure love on his face, before his image faded right before her very eyes. Not even death can separate us. I am always with you, and will be forever - until you come to join me. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbi615 Posted February 14, 2009 Report Share Posted February 14, 2009 Wow!!! That was amazing, you are such a talented writer . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Laura Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 That was really good. Really well written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KaitieL Posted February 15, 2009 Report Share Posted February 15, 2009 Awww... you made me cry. What a great way to start the day. It was brilliant. Well written. Even though Jacky's dead and never coming back. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Thanks for all the comments you guys it was my first time writing a 'one shot' - and I really enjoyed it ; I appreciate the reads & comments big time! *hugs* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 "I love you Jack, she whispered silently, mouthing the words, and then, in the reflection, saw him nod at her, with that familiar look of pure love on his face, before his image faded right before her very eyes. Not even death can separate us. I am always with you, and will be forever - until you come to join me. Wow That bit moved me so much. You are such a talented writer. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pengzilla Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 Wow.. You really made me tear up. And get goose bumps. I was fine.. until the rapist guy said "But she wasn’t alone. There was a man walking next to her". That idea is so.. nice. You're making me want to cry just thinking about it. It's nice to think that if someone has died, they're still there when you need them. Good one-shot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lino Posted February 16, 2009 Report Share Posted February 16, 2009 that was really amazing written. good job. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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