Louise_2983 Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Story Title: Blazing Hearts Type of story: Medium Fic Main Characters: Aden Jeffries, Belle Taylor, Nicole Franklin, Geoff Campbell Other characters: Most other regulars BTTB rating: A Genre: Angst/Romance/Drama Spoilers: UK Spoilers Proof Read: No Warnings: Some sexual scenes, descriptions of tragic event, fic deals with death Summary: Tragedy strikes at Summer Bay High with potentially devasting consequences for five of the Bay's residents. Prologue. There was silence in every direction penetrated only by the occasional clatter of rubble as she watched them search. Yet in her subconscious she was haunted by the whirring sirens, nervous chatter and discreet whispers of the day gone by, despite the loud and unavoidable thumping of her heart threatening to drown them all out. Seconds ticked by, minutes, hours. Time was meaningless. She would stand there for days. Watching, waiting, hoping. Needing, praying, fading. She stood, rooted to the exact same spot she had occupied for the past 8 hours, too scared to move, to alter any fraction of her being as though it would alter her history and future and take him from her forever. A whirl of activity around the entrance nearest to her caught her attention, causing the hazy ball of hope within her to simultaneously plummet and rise, tightening each breath and stirring nausea in her exhausted body. The light was fading now, like fate was conspiring against her, against them, against him and using a switch to dim the sun. In the shadows cast by the setting sun however, she could just about witness the horrifying sight before her. The strong, able bodied males carried the black bag delicately from the destroyed building. The strength and life radiating from their beings only serving to contrast and highlight the empty and lifeless frame they supported in their arms. Resting the departed figure, camouflaged by the stiff, black material of the once empty bag, on the waiting gurney they lowered their heads in respect. A sharp and breathy scream escaped from her being as she half covered her eyes not bearing to look but unable to fully tear herself away as he slipped from her grasp. Distancing himself from the group, one male moved towards her. Tears in his eyes glistened in the dimming light as he approached. "Roman?" she questioned him, each syllable punctuated by gasps brimming with fear. "Belle..." He stopped next to her small and petrified body and placed a hand delicately on her right shoulder. "Belle, it's..."
LAURZY! Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Oh my word who is it??!?! That was great!!
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Great start, but I cant believe you left it there Please update soon, who was Roman talking about ???
Louise_2983 Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Lol, anyone who has read my other fic knows I have a habit of cutting off in the cruelest places!
rfran Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Good start can't wait for more. Cliff hangers are fantasticaly addictive
Taniya_K Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Damn you and your cliffies! Great start though. Cannot wait for more. xoxo
xknomex Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Who is it!?!?!? You have to update like....Now!!!!! xxx
meant2live Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Right I'm going to start by saying; killing Aden is not good, you may have a riot on your hands if you do. So lets hope you haven't, although agnsty fics are interesting and it would be a nice difference. Anyway... love it, just like your other fic, it's awesome and all cliffhangified! Can't wait for more
Louise_2983 Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Hmm let me think. Have I killed off Aden? Not telling yet Meant2Live your avatar is stunning!
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