meant2live Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Oooh interesting. Aden don't be so stubborn, stay there! Be a good boy! This is awesome and I loved it
LAURZY! Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 So glad she didnt let him leave! That was beautifully written, absloutely loved it Great update
MissOlivia22 Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Um.... I just realized I didn't post it all...... The very end got cut off. XD -- “Your obviously here because you want to be alone” She said noting the annoyance on his face when she had pulled him back “It’s yours. I’ll find out where else” she stated. Her hand still on his wrist, she bent down and picked up her rucksack. She held onto him as she walked past and gently let his hand drop when he became too far out of reach Aden watched her go until she was out of view. He sat down on the sand; his knee’s pulled tightly up to his chest, and let tears fall freely down his face. -- I'll also edit it in
Taniya_K Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 My poor Aden I'm so glad that she didn't let him go even after he yelled at her. I hope he opens up to her. Well, maybe it's too soon, but at least stays Cute ending. AOL at Belle letting him having the place, but where will she go now? More soon. xoxo
Beate Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Very touching scene. Great update. Looking forward to more.
meant2live Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Dammit... I thought he was gonna open up, but no he then lets HER leave. Silly silly Aden... yes I am too intrigued where Belle will go now
xknomex Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 My poor Aden!! I'm absolutely Loving this fic. It's just so different. I hope Aden lets Belle in, cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Update soon xx
rfran Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 This is great love the fic. It's fantastic to see the a different place
Aden+Belle forever Posted November 4, 2008 Report Posted November 4, 2008 Poor Aden, although he shouldnt have said what he said to Belle (when he called her a hobo) Let Belle in Aden, you know you want too
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