wrongturntaken Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 Very interesting idea! Can't wait to read more! Quote
xknomex Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 WOW that was good!!! a great start to what looks like an outstanding fic! Adens bros are so evil taking him away from Belle! Quote
Taniya_K Posted September 1, 2008 Report Posted September 1, 2008 omg that was just so... touching! Poor Aden! I hope Belle doesn't think that he's a criminal! update soon! Quote
whispered_envy Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 (edited) Thanks guys! I think I may have rushed that beginning a little but I wanted to set up before the real drama starts. Or maybe I'm just being too critical of my work! Working on the next parts now. Edited September 2, 2008 by whispered_envy Quote
Jody Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 (edited) You are just being critical of your own work. Great start to what already looks to be an amazing fic. I can't wait to see where you go with this. Edited September 2, 2008 by enjoy the ride Quote
jenlee Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 That was really great, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the awesome work Quote
Jody Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 I like Aden walking of and not telling them what their father said. It was also good that he let them fight amongst themselves instead of trying to stop them and giving them a chance to start on him. Quote
Frogg Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 Oooooooooooooooh this is good!!! More! More!!! Quote
~Lynd~ Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 This is really good,different to all the Adelle fics.Not that i don't love them to! Quote
xknomex Posted September 2, 2008 Report Posted September 2, 2008 i am liking this fic! its soo different to all the others! Quote
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