matticus01 Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Wow that was . . . Intense. . . I could really feel Geoff's anger building up inside him, jsut wanting to let go . . That was an amazing one shot and I really liked the song as well . . . Well done! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Luc Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 (edited) Wow is my first response to this fic. I really agree with what Bec said, you could really feel a Geoff's anger built up, and the way you wrote the beating was, graphic, to say the least, but in a good way. Well done, I enjoyed that Edited June 7, 2008 by Luc Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack+martha=trooluvv Posted June 7, 2008 Report Share Posted June 7, 2008 Wow. Graphic violence much?? LOL, it was great!! I could imagine Geoff letting out his rage like that. I'd like to read more from you soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
h&a-girl Posted June 8, 2008 Report Share Posted June 8, 2008 Wow so intense I love it. I went and had a listen to the song and it fits so perfectly, love the way you worked the song in with the story. Geoff's emotions were so real, you really conveyed them well! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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