sevenpuddings Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 So wait? Matilda+Lucas are together? *squeals* I like it Jen, the description is great, and the concept is really original! Plus, I'm always a fan of multi-chapter teen stories! The declaration of love was obviously fresh as I focussed on a dribble of red paint. It ran down the harsh metallic background, gaining speed, as it’s bloody tail trailed along behind the head. That description in particular was stunning. Like you said, it has a mixture of angst, drama and romance, and I could totally feel that going on there. I'm all excited now, I don't think theres been a Matilda/Lucas story in ages on this board! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 Jen you know what I think of this fic, cuz I proofed it :] Great job! Cant wait to see Chapter 2 in my inbox Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shortie_689 Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 I like the look of this so far, I'm really interested to see where this goes can't wait for the next chapter!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liska Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 I like this so far. Can't wait for your next chapter! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
heidikri Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 Great start, looking forward to read more of this fic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jen Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 Thanks everyone. I wasn't too sure what you'd think. Jess, yep Mattie and Luc are together . Hopefully will have an update soon. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 Love it! Mattie and Lucas Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted June 11, 2007 Report Share Posted June 11, 2007 Hmmm a bit of guilt coming out there. Nice chapter, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Liska Posted June 11, 2007 Report Share Posted June 11, 2007 Great chapter. Can't wait to the next chapter Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sevenpuddings Posted June 11, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2007 “There wouldn’t be enough room for all the things I would want to write about you.” I lit up inside and smiled, (maybe he wasn’t so clueless after all), and then leaning in I kissed him once more. just so AWWWW there. *sighs* I love this story. I miss Maddie and Luke so much at times. And you write them wonderfully. I love the intrigue too. Can't wait for more! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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