Emma Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Story Title: I Love You, Forever And Always. Type of story: One-Shot Main Characters: Jack & Martha BTTB rating: A Genre: Romance Does story include spoilers: No Any warnings: None Summary: You will be able to see how much Jack and Martha love each other. Ok, so I hope you guys will all like this. This is my first story that I have made on here and I plan on making more. Chapter One: She couldn't beleive it. It had been 5 months and 3 days since she last told her she loved him. Memories flashed in her mind like something whizzing past. She had always loved him from the moment she set eyes on him. She missed the lazy sunday afternoons they had together, and the nice walks on the beach they used to share together, and the evenings out with their friends. She walked out of her room with the memories still in her mind. She quickly had a shower and got dressed, and then all of a sudden decided that she would go out for a walk. She could see him. Standing right infront of her, was Jack. Gosh, he's handsome she thought. Jack slowly walked up to Martha. "Good Morning" says Jack. "Hi" replies Martha. "How have you been lately"? asks Jack. "Fine, what about yourself"? replies Martha. "Im good." says Jack. "Hey, I think we need to talk sometime, how about tonight - my place about 6:00"? says Jack. "Ok, I think we need to do a bit of talking, I will see you then". replies Martha. "See you" replies Jack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bttb-rox! Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Ohhh very intriguing indeed, I wonder why they need to talk?? She couldn't beleive it. It had been 5 months and 3 days since she last told her she loved him. Very cute . Memories flashed in her mind like something whizzing past. Brilliant description of what she was feeling. I also liked the bit where you described what they used to do together, it was very realistic . Great job, looking foward to the next chapter . (I PMed you about the index form btw) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam =) Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 More, more, more! I need to know what they are going to talk about it better be good. Anyways loved it Update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holden_girl9051 Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 I like it already please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beckyboo Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Good Start!! Update soon xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 She missed the lazy sunday afternoons they had together, and the nice walks on the beach they used to share together, and the evenings out with their friends. She walked out of her room with the memories still in her mind. She quickly had a shower and got dressed, and then all of a sudden decided that she would go out for a walk. So sweet and perfect "Hey, I think we need to talk sometime, how about tonight - my place about 6:00"? says Jack. "Ok, I think we need to do a bit of talking, I will see you then". replies Martha. Also perfect What are they going to talk about? More soon xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emma Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Thankyou everyone, glad to see you are all enjoying it Chapter 2: Knock Knock Jack suddenly heard at the door. There stands Martha, the love of his life. Gosh, I miss her, he thought. "Hi Jack", says Martha. "Gidday Martha, make yourself at home", said Jack. Martha missed being here. She started to get reminders of everything again. "I have got dinner on, you are more than welcome to stay for it", says Jack. "Oh, that would be great thanx", said Martha with a sweet smile on her face. "Now, I think we need to talk Martha", said Jack. "Alot has happened these past few months, with Cam and everything to you working in that bar", said Jack. "Look, I know I have made some mistakes and I just want to explain how silly it was getting caught up with someone like Cam", said Martha. "Everyone makes mistakes Martha, and it wasn't your fault", said Jack. "You know what I love about you?", said Martha. "What?", asked Jack. "I love how you can be so forgiving and love everyone the way you do and never blame them for anything, that's really sweet Jack," says Martha. "I do try my best," says Jack with a grin. "Oooh, look at that. The timer has gone off and dinner is ready. How about we sit and eat for a while and then we can go back to where we left off?" said Jack. "Ok, sounds good," replied Martha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted August 26, 2007 Report Share Posted August 26, 2007 Martha missed being here. She started to get reminders of everything again. Beautiful line, really brought the story out Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emma Posted August 29, 2007 Report Share Posted August 29, 2007 Next chapter should be up sometime next week Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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