Guest Posted July 21, 2007 Report Posted July 21, 2007 Type of story:= Long Fiction Rating: (see BTTB rating guidance) PG Main Characters: ie. Lucas and Belle / Multiple character Alexis and Martha Genre: Drama/ Romance/ Angst/ A mixture Romance/amixture Warnings: Any content you feel needs a warning: ie. Violence, sexual content, coarse language etc. Is Story being proof read: No Summary: Briefly summarise your story (5 lines max).Martha's daughter show up to Summer Bay Chapter 1 Alexis had just arrived at Summer Bay. Alexis knew that her adopted parents would be angry that she ran away. But Alexis had to find her real mum. Alexis saw a woman that looked just like her she walked up to the woman and said "Are you my birth mother"? "Yes you must be Alexis†Replied Martha "Oh you look actually as I pictured†Alexis said "Won't your adopted parents be worried that you've ran away� Asked Martha "Yes they would be but I had to find you†Replied Alexis "Well I'll let you stay with me and Jack until I can find your adopted parents†Said Martha "No I want to stay with you and Jack†Replied Alexis "Okay will ring your adopted parents and set a date to go to court for the custody papers†Said Martha "Oh thank you†Cried Alexis Alexis is ten years old Martha is twenty years old Alexis knew about Jack because her foster parents told her about Martha and the last they heard she was with Jack. The reason why the court should give custody to Jack and Martha is because Alexis adopted father hit her all the time and her foster mum took it to court and then Alexis decided to find her birth mother.
matticus01 Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 Alexis saw a woman that looked just like her she walked up to the woman and said "Are you my birth mother"? "Yes you must be Alexis” Replied Martha no offence to you, yes its a great story but the above quote is a bit far fetched but so far so good keept it up..
Guest Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 Chapter 2 Jack walked into the house he saw the little girl standing there. Jack asked Martha who's this and Martha answered this is our daughter that we gave up for adoption but she now wants to live with us. So we go to court tommorrow and were gonna try and get custody of her. Alexis needs me more than her adopted mum said Martha Well I have always wanted a daughter replied Jack. Jack and Martha just got back from court and they were now the proud parents of Alexis. Alexis adopted parents said goodbye to her and told her to behave herself with Jack and Martha. Alexis soon became close to Martha. Martha enrolled Alexis into school and there Alexis met a cute boy his name was Jared.
Cerise Posted July 26, 2007 Report Posted July 26, 2007 Hey ric_mattie, In order with the Rules For FanFiction, Librarians would appreciate if you Filled in the following form and you pasted it at the top of your opening Post: Type of story: one-shot/ long fiction/ short fiction/ undecided Rating: (see BTTB rating guidance) Main Characters: ie. Lucas and Belle / Multiple character Genre: Drama/ Romance/ Angst/ A mixture Warnings: Any content you feel needs a warning: ie. Violence, sexual content, coarse language etc. Is Story being proof read: Yes/No Summary: Briefly summarise your story (5 lines max). Thanks, -Kirst-
dee83 Posted September 4, 2007 Report Posted September 4, 2007 hope this story continues causes so far its great
Guest Posted April 27, 2008 Report Posted April 27, 2008 OMG I forgot all about this fan fiction Here's an update Chapter 3 Alexis and Martha spent quality time together and become very close. Jack still needed to work on becoming friends with Alexis. Alexis made several friends at her new school the first minute Alexis walked in the door to school she saw Lucas and Jared. Alexis walked up to Jared but little did she know that she interrupted a conversation with his girlfriend. Once the girlfriend was gone Alexis said to Jared you'd be better off with me than you are with her. Apparently Alexis gave up on Lucas wen she saw Jared. Alexis walked into her house only to find a NAKED guy in her kitchen she screamed and then realized it was Jack. "Dad go put some clothes on" Said Alex "Oh did I scare you Alexis?"Jack Replied "Yes you did dad"Alexis replied "JACK go put some clothes on before you scare your daughter" Said Martha "Sorry dear"Replied Jack "You should know better than to walk around naked around the house"Replied Martha "You shuld listen to Mum"Said Alexis "Ok I'm going and sorry for scaring you dear"Replied Jack "It's okay dad but don't do it again” Replied Alexis "I won't"Replied Jack
*caitie* Posted April 28, 2008 Report Posted April 28, 2008 haha walking around the house naked lol This awesome!!! But how old is Alexis? Update soon!!! :)
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