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Ah that was lovely.

All those things they were going to do with one another all those dreams they were going to fulfill together…none of them were going to happen.

Aww that was so sad.

‘I cooked it myself’ Matilda said cheekily.

He laughed, which was something he hadn’t done in what felt like a long time.

‘It nice to hear you laugh’ Matilda said smiling.

His relationship with Matilda is so cute, really genuine.

It was early afternoon and the light and the sound of the water trickling occasionally, was calming him.

Beautiful description.

As the sun shone brightly over them, Tony, Matilda, Lucas and Jack all linked arms, and started to think about their future as a family together.

Lovely happy ending, so nice to see them as a family. I just went 'awww' all the way through this!

It was really sweet and just right, I loved how it was sad but ended on a happy theme. It was really well done, I feel all mushy now. Poor Tony. You write him so well.

Great one shot.

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