Skykat Posted June 30, 2007 Report Posted June 30, 2007 Ah that was lovely. All those things they were going to do with one another all those dreams they were going to fulfill together…none of them were going to happen. Aww that was so sad. ‘I cooked it myself’ Matilda said cheekily. He laughed, which was something he hadn’t done in what felt like a long time. ‘It nice to hear you laugh’ Matilda said smiling. His relationship with Matilda is so cute, really genuine. It was early afternoon and the light and the sound of the water trickling occasionally, was calming him. Beautiful description. As the sun shone brightly over them, Tony, Matilda, Lucas and Jack all linked arms, and started to think about their future as a family together. Lovely happy ending, so nice to see them as a family. I just went 'awww' all the way through this! It was really sweet and just right, I loved how it was sad but ended on a happy theme. It was really well done, I feel all mushy now. Poor Tony. You write him so well. Great one shot. Quote
-Karen- Posted June 30, 2007 Report Posted June 30, 2007 Excellent work Coco! It would have been nice to have seen some of that stuff in the actual show! I especially loved Beth's letter and Tony's interaction with Mattie. Quote
bttb-rox! Posted June 30, 2007 Report Posted June 30, 2007 Aww thank you so much guys!! I feel it needed to end on a happy note as it was meant to be a bit sad to begin with and then show how he started to accept that she was gone . Thanks again for your comments!! Quote
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