Liska Posted April 3, 2007 Report Posted April 3, 2007 It looks good! And I have this feeling that this girl will break up Ric and Matilda. Anyway, keep it coming! Quote
Cerise Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Great Writing Eli, and great Story. Update soon Quote
Cal Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Oh, I love it! It's really gripping. I normally wouldn't read a chapter that long, but it was really well written. I wonder who this Ms. Carlson is? And how she knows Ric.... Quote
Cal Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 (edited) *Double post* >.< Edited April 4, 2007 by -Cal- Quote
Eli Posted April 4, 2007 Report Posted April 4, 2007 Thanks I don't think a lot of people likes it though, judging from my number of hits compared to my number of replies Quote
.Amy. Posted April 5, 2007 Report Posted April 5, 2007 (edited) I like it, would love to read more. Edited April 6, 2007 by .Amy. Quote
sazcaz89 Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 This ff is amazing!!! Please update soon!!! Quote
matty and luke forever Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 Ohhhhh Ric grrrrrrr......You have to update soon Quote
Cal Posted April 9, 2007 Report Posted April 9, 2007 (edited) Oh dear, looks like Ric is going straight to third base! This woman is a complete mystery. I had my theories on who it might be, but then reading this chapter kind of threw those theories out the window . I thought maybe it would have been Cassie, but then Matilda went to her, so.... Grrrr Eli, You've actually got me thinking, damn you! Edited April 9, 2007 by -Cal- Quote
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