beckyboo Posted April 19, 2007 Report Posted April 19, 2007 Yay your writting another one This is so good! Jack is looking at other girls whilst he's with Martha tut tut Nobodys ever done that lol This is soo good Update soon xxxxxxxxxx Quote
vale4eva Posted April 19, 2007 Report Posted April 19, 2007 Summary: Jack and Martha are very happy but then Jack meets the wonderful, amazing and beautiful Becky. Who will Jack end up with? Becky! Yay, you started a new fic! But Jacks got the hots for another girl Not happy! Update soon Quote
Tasha Posted April 20, 2007 Report Posted April 20, 2007 urgh! I hate Becky She sounds nice, but Jack is falling for her, and i hate all girls that Jack falls for except for Martha Great start. You have a lot of fics under your belt Great work though More please Quote
beckyboo Posted April 20, 2007 Author Report Posted April 20, 2007 They all sat down and had the dinner. It was lovely. Alf was certainly a good cook. Jack thought. But Alf was certainly good at hiding things as he managed to hide the container in which the food was delivered in from the best restaurant in town ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Hahaha This is fab Update soon xxxxx Quote
vale4eva Posted April 20, 2007 Report Posted April 20, 2007 Alf! Im not likeing Jacks personalitly in this fic! Jack doesnt love Martha! What kind of sick freaky demention is this! Great fic, more please Quote
Zetti Posted April 20, 2007 Report Posted April 20, 2007 I cant believe there is another Becky! Cant believe Jack is a perv! More please Quote
kaciexox Posted April 20, 2007 Report Posted April 20, 2007 ALF!!! Jack can't like Becky because he loves Martha Quote
Tasha Posted April 21, 2007 Report Posted April 21, 2007 fun, adventurous, mysterious and amazingly beautiful looking girl. *cough* excuse me. Martha isnt any of those??? Martha isnt an amzingly beautiful looking girl?? Wow, Jack needs glasses. The poor girl. I dont like Jack in this fic Alf Great chapter More please Quote
beckyboo Posted April 21, 2007 Author Report Posted April 21, 2007 Poor Martha tut tut Jacky boy Good on Becky for making him see sense!!! If he truly loved her. he would have went straight home!!! Update soon Quote
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