A Deeper Love (by loobieloo) - comments

[xsianx]

You made my eyes water! lol not Cry just water.

 

I still like Belle though..

Poor Martha. The ending (awww)

Jack had better of dumped Sam afterwoods.. it was all her fault

 

Great writing miss Lau.

Edited January 23, 2016 by QUIET ACHIEVER

[>>Emma<<]

Noooooo Martha's dead! Well I want to know why Belle killed her, why? Is this a one shot? I don't want it to be even though you killed Martha!

Poor Jack, please update soon if its a long fic!

[Jamey-Maria]

You're an evil, evil person. Lol. It was beautiful but so sad Damn you for killing her. It should have been freakin pixie girl dammnit! What did you do to my Belle?! Why did you have to make me so sad?

Edited December 24, 2006 by Jamey-Maria

[Tasha]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Laura, i hate you. You killed Martha. I hate people who kill Martha, so i hate you. I cant believe you killed Martha Poor Jacky baby

[gawguss_tiff]

ARGH you killed her omg BELLE!! aww that was soo sad i have teary eyes now great writting but i HATED the ending lol well excellent start or one shot whatever it was lol

xoxo

[Nicom]

Awwwwww

Can I just say, I actually have heard of someone who went through a very similar thing. Of course without Belle and Jack.

In my lovely area someone had the same thing done, one of my Mum's friends from work. I was quite weirded out when I started reading the knife part, because that's what he'd done. Sick.

But I'm not going to go into the details and stuff, because...

1. It's sick.

2. It's very sad.

and 3. I'm supposed to be reviewing your fic!!

See, this is what happens when you write a sad one shot! Don't do it again!

Instead, write a happy one shot.

Nice work.