Martha_Jack Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 That was good can not wait into an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-ParaisGal- Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Well written. I love this! Is she and Jack going to be an item? And get her outta that club. lol. She belongs in Noah's, with Jack Keep going and update soon (I hope) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Great start Nicole. Loving it. Im glad Jack and Sam are no more, and i cant wiat to see Jack's reaction, or well read about Jacks reaction to Martha's new secret life More please Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Jade- Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Nicole, I really think that this is amazing. Seriously, the writing is your best, and I love the fact that you're pushing yourself with the subject. Really really terrific stuff. And I love the title! Inspired. *nods* Your writing just gets better and better, seriously. I can't wait for the next bit! (As in, the next bit that i haven't read ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 I have been waiting for this to be posted and I'm so glad that you have! A great start to what is going to be the best storyline. I can't wait to see Martha spiral downwards, only because you seem to write these things so well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Yay, you started another fic. I love it already, Jack isn't with Sam . Your writing is brilliant and this is a great start “Helping her with deliveries my arse.” Kim whispered, before sitting in front of Jack. Hehehe loved that line. Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zetti Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 I love this please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
puja Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 Great start! I'm so glad you've decided to post this fic You may post as often as you like Jack needs to get his ass into gear and talk some sense into out 'lost' Martha. Please update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted February 19, 2007 Report Share Posted February 19, 2007 I love it! but the best part has to be there's no Sam. Thank you. Beautiful description. Come on Jack, save Martha before it's too late.. . I don't like Mike. I bet he's ugly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Laura- Posted February 20, 2007 Report Share Posted February 20, 2007 Yay Nicole you have finally posted the fic behind the graphic! lol And it was really really good! Your writing and descriptions are soooo good! I loved it all! (Well except for the fact Jack and Martha arent together but then we wouldnt really have a story now would we! Hehe!) Cant wait for more and to see where this goes, something tells me Jacks not going to be a happy bunny when he finds out where Martha is working now! Hehe! Update soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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