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What? What just happened? Um, I don't think that did. What?

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Wow, I didn't expect that!

Okay, I loved it! You had so many twists and turns in that it was great!! I totally did not expect the Ric and Mattie kiss! I could completely feel Matilda's shock! It was so out of the blue, it was great :) And soooo sweet!

And then your second twist...Wow, that just made your story so much deeper. But I hope she doesn't die :'( I wonder how Ric will feel and act towards Mattie.

Great job, it really was. Aww, please update soon!

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