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Finally Martha realises, BUT IT'S A LITTLE TOO LATE, don't you think? Please Nicole, how many chapters are you going to have Jack in pain? Callum for somone who was supposed to be a freak and a stalker (and a damn good one!) you sure let your self go in the end, you were very carless with the knife. Tsk, tsk, tsk dumbass!!!! Anyway i'm hoping for a little blood drawn from Martha, i need her to suffer just a little before i can completley forgive her, it's only fair:P Great chapter Nicole, please update soon!!!

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Great chapter Nicole!!!

That was a really good emotional scene with Martha listening to Jack pleading with her to get away! She deserves to be upset and to suffer some more for not believing Jack!

But I do hope she gets away from Callum, why the hell doesn't she ring Peter and tell him where they are before Callum drives off?

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