-lolly- Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 Fantastic! Im glad there not fighting anymore!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamey-Maria Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 Nicole i love that chapter! I loved it when i first read it and i still love it! I think you made them sound very real to their characters, and i imagine it was also extremely difficult for you to write a happy scene. Don't just cough at them because when you write that rubbish (and i DON'T mean your writting technique) with Callum, i think you annoy everyone........lol. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 Well, at least he can put up with her annoying-ness! Unlike some moaning people.. *cough* bay_girl and linzie_mac01 *cough* lol All i have to say is that i'm glad that my personality is not Jacks then, cause they would never get together, let alone get together for long lol That was a really lovely chapter, i think we should definitely have more than just one chapter of mushy scenes between those two; they make such a great couple (*romantic sigh*)! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
linzie_mac01 Posted May 23, 2006 Report Share Posted May 23, 2006 (edited) hey Nicole thank you for posting again, woo hoo!!! That was such an awww moment, then an ohhh moment! Jack you said it in one: what is happeneing to you? I'll tell you what, its unecessary jealousy, thats what! And I now officially take back any doubts about Martha betraying Jack. I'm so sorry Martha, i guess i forgot how much you still love Jack and you are only confused 'cause Jack keeps getting jealous over nothing (on her behalf anyway). I still hate Callum for calling when he did, talk about timing lol. not to mention all the other things he does. aargh he was not even in that chapter much and I still feel like punching him still! Edited May 23, 2006 by linzie_mac01 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Callum just leave them alone..... This is sooo good!! It made me smile (except when callum left a messge and interupted them:P) Happy Birthday for tomorrow as well!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_love_goddess Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Great chapter Nicole. I really liked it , it was so romantic. Anyways Happy Birthday for tomorrow. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lollipop_lover11 Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 good job!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hotchoc Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 awwwwww that was so romantic!!! except when the annoying callum interrupted!! lol Fantastic chapter Nicole and Happy Birthday!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
princess_jessik Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 Awww....I love them!! They are adorable....if only that would happen on the show. *sighs* Great update Nicole! I love your stories bcuz they are always so good. ohh & Happy Birthday! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted May 24, 2006 Report Share Posted May 24, 2006 great as usual hope theres more coming happy birthday Nicole Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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