phize Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 Amazing! i'm hooked! please update asap!! i'm so glad its going to be a long story! Quote
Jamey-Maria Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 It's amazing! They're having a baby.. aww Jack get your butt over there! I hope Mac's o.k. The writing was brilliant, please update soon. Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 Awww I love it. The baby is on its way. I just hope Jack gets there in time to see his baby being born.... Quote
puja Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 (edited) Don't apologies for writing a J+M fanfic...we love them! A fantastic opening chapter; your writing style is very good and easy to read. Please make Martha and the bub ok and get Jack in there asap! Update soon, can't wait to read on!! Edited September 4, 2006 by puja Quote
xsianx Posted September 4, 2006 Report Posted September 4, 2006 I love J&M fics and I love this already. Update soon. Quote
Emily11 Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Aww that was awesome! Great start!! Quote
-Annie- Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 Aww, terrific! Can't wait for more! Quote
Tasha Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 He was gorgeous, unbelievably gorgeous; You sure got that right Great start. Im already hooked. Poor Martha. I hope Jack gets to her quickly. Yay a baby Holden, we need more of them Cant wait for the next chapter. And never apologise for writing a Jack and Martha fan fic. The more fan fics there are of them the happier i am Please update soon Quote
Jacksthehottest Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 great start, your writing is excellent, can't wait for more Quote
xGlowingAngelx Posted September 5, 2006 Report Posted September 5, 2006 ‘Not the biggest fan of Daddy’s kisses eh?' That has to be the sweetest line ever!!! Great chapter! I'm glad Jack got there in time, he'd have been gutted to miss the birth. Anyway, great chapter. Please update soon Quote
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