Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 I want a hug too, Chris!! * cries* Mattie Please update soon! ok deal. I take everything i said about Rachel back *Gives Shan a hug too* Woah! I can't remember but is there anything on Dan/Leah/Drew? Um there is not much Drew or Dan and Leah as they dont have a much of a storyline Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 Ok guys the next part will be up after dinner I am going out though so yeh maybe around 8:00pm tonight ok but this is the first line ok 4 days since the death of Mattie everyone comes and say a final goodbye to their friend everyone talks about Mattie Beth begins the speech but she cries most of the speech Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 The car gose by with Mattie coffin in it The church Beth: When ever I see Mattie it makes me think all the time she will always be a Hunter all the way Goodbye Mattie I love you The Grave site Mattie coffin is next to Jack Hunter (1945-2002) The grave says Maltida Hunter (1990-2007) Sorry if this is not much but I need to continue on my other part of the story The Beach House Irene: What the HELL are you doing here Diana: Well Irene I am here to talk about your love for my granddaughter Oliva Irene: What have I got to do with that Diana: You are an Alcoholic and a selfish liar Irene: Get out you evil little abuser Diana: What the hell did you say Irene: I said get out of my house or I will make that big nose of your shrink and break The Party Everyone Is getting orangzied and ready Leah: This looks so great Dan: Yeh It dose But little they know that 4 baddies are watching We see the 4 baddies Mumma Rose Diana Corey Zoe Watch out Summer Bay the big explosion is here and we are about to say goodbye to 6 loves ones in this explosion these are the people that are back Mumma Rose Diana Corey Zoe Rhys Sheally Dani Jade Kirsty Kane Hayley Henry Kit Soctt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 omg is jack and martha die i will cry sooooo much great chapter. Loved Irene's last like abotu Diana's nose Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 Guys this is it get ready for the final part of this Fic The Party Everyone is dancing and enjoying themselves But little they know danger is getting closer Irene and Beth talk about Tasha and Robbie Irene: Yeh poor Rob he been thorugh so much this year Beth: Yeh Irene: And you Beth: Ok I just wish Mattie was here Irene: Yeh so do I Mumma Rose and Corey crashes the party everyone is shock Mumma Rose: Where is the choosen one Corey: Irene it been a long time hasn't it Now a few mins later Zoe and Diana comes in BOOM Guys this is just very short and sounds dumb but I just want to get to the dying bit ok 6 Will die The Hospital Alf,Amanda,Kim,Brad,Leah,Cassie,Tony,Martha,Tasha,Robbie and Jack all rushed to hospital out of the 12 people I wrote down now which 6 will die? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 please dont kill jack and martha, but if theres not sequel you can kill them both. Its either both or neither Great chapter though Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 please dont kill jack and martha, but if theres not sequel you can kill them both. Its either both or neither Great chapter though Please update soon Don't worry I have not choose my final 4 as I choose to kill off Alf and Kim so don't panic I am sure you wont cry when these are my final 6 people and yeh Mumma Rose,Corey,Zoe,Diana,Rhys,Sheally,Dani all died as well but never were found in the explosion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 lol they all burnt to ashes. So Jack and Martha arent gonna die? That is such a relief *dances* Aww...not Alf, you cant kill Alf *cries* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 lol they all burnt to ashes. So Jack and Martha arent gonna die? That is such a relief *dances* Aww...not Alf, you cant kill Alf *cries* Yeh I deicde out of Alf or Sally to die and yes Sally too Young and it only been a year since Flynn death and yeh Alf is going to die and yes it will be sad I will make a new Fan Fic after this and it will be called Martha and Jack return Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted August 18, 2006 Report Share Posted August 18, 2006 lol Jack and Martha return, thats the name of the sequel? I like it. You know the whole fic will have to be about them then Not that im complaining. The more J/M fics the merrier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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