Guest Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 I am writing my Fan Fic on mircosoft word then I will copy and paste it on here ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Rosey~ Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 I like it Kepp up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 The mayor office Alf is sitting on a chair at his desk ‘Come in Ms Vale Amanda: Mr Stewart I need you to tell Belle to meet at my place Alf: Amanda why Belle is living with Irene and don’t tell me you are her mother Amanda: How did you know? Alf: Morag and Belle Is not in the right stake now and the real identify of Belle’s Mother will be tested and for all we know that you may not be the mother it could be Irene as I know she gave up a child when she was 14 as well Amanda: But Belle was born in 1990 and I was 14 at the time Alf: Well then let stop talking about this and please get out of my Office The Beach Kim is walking along the beach with Rachael Kim: So Rach when is the test result back Rachael: Um don’t know but I will transferred this to the city Kim: Ok I will be at the gym if you need me Rachael: Ok see you Kim: Yeh um try and not do too much today at work Rachael: Hey I will be fine The Diner Colleen is having a farewell party Sally: Welcome come guys as we are here today to say goodbye to Colleen and Tom now where do I start ok about 19 years ago I met Colleen now when she helps me through many things like coping with my husband death and when Pippa left and I did make a great friend called Lance but now the time has come to an end I want to wish you and Colleen and Tom a very best and a happy ending we will miss you Irene: Colleen you are such a great friend to me I will never forget the day that you help me when I had hard times I will miss you Alf: Colleen my friend what a rollercoaster we had since everything that happen it made me think you and my sister Morag it just funny but I will never forget the great friendship we had over the years Colleen: Thank you so much everyone I had a great time here in summer bay but I hope you all have a wonderful day even after today goodbye my friends Colleen and Tom goes into a taxi and drives off Summer Bay High The bell rings for lunch Cassie: Hey Mattie what do you have next Mattie: I have Human Bio Cassie: Oh I have History with Ric Mattie: Hey don’t worry about the slant The other part of the school Lucas: Hey Ric how was Maths Ric: Not too bad but I have History with Cassie Lucas: Oh not good I got PE with my dad now that is even worst isn’t it Ric: Yeh but he better when he is not teaching Lucas: Ha-ha very funny Belle walks up to Dan Dan: Giddy Belle Belle: Hey Mr Baker what coming up in Drama today Dan: Um we will be doing our performance I guess Belle: Ok but I will be 5 minutes late as the Dean wants to see me Dan: Ok that fine Belle: Thanks Belle walks off A mystery Car goes past the Hunter/Holden house The Pad Jack: Martha will you be alright today as I have to go and do my duties Martha: Yes I will be ok and I will ring you if I need to Jack: Ok see you The classroom Cassie: Um Ms can I go and see Mattie Ms Whittle: Yes Outside Mattie classroom Cassie: Are you ok Mattie because you look so hot and tired Mattie: Look I am fine ok I don’t need you to turn into my mother Mattie faints Cassie: Mattie wake up come on Ms Doubt: we need to call an ambulance Cassie: I will ring Beth Will Mattie be heartbroken by the truth of her burns and scars? Is Martha alright? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Chris- Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones That could be a good idea, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 Should i make a poll who do think the seven people that will die in my fan fic and then i will see who might be right becareful who you choose as it may be some love ones That could be a good idea, Um -Chris- i dont know how to post with a poll on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 13, 2006 Report Share Posted August 13, 2006 -Chris- the polls are up it in the purple box ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 The Hospital Mattie is rush into operating therete Cassie: Will she be ok please tell me Racheal: Um I dont know yet but we will look at these burns and scars Cassie: What but I thought she was ok but today I ask her if she needs a doctor and she said no Racheal: Cassie please if you want me to find out about Mattie then let me go ok Cassie: Ok can I ring Beth Racheal: Yes there the telephone over there The Holden House Ring Ring Beth comes and picks the phone Beth: Hello this is Beth Holden here Cassie slow down and I will be straight away The Hospital Beth comes running in Beth: Cassie are you alright Cassie: No It Mattie she collasped at school today Beth: But she told me she was ok Cassie: No It not that It the burns and the scars Beth: What where is she Oh Racheal please tell me that Mattie is ok Racheal: Um I cant tell you as It very hard for me to explain this Beth: But she my daughter Racheal: I know she is but i cant tell Mattie as well Beth: Ok we can find a quite place Racheal: Yes now is that ok Cassie I dont want you to hear this untill Beth decides to tell you Cassie: Ok Racheal's Office Beth: So what the news will she be ok Racheal: When was the last time Mattie got sunburnt Beth: just two weeks ago Racheal: Oh no Beth you can have every right to do anything to me as it heartbreaking Beth: Ok Racheal: She got...got...Cancer Beth: No but she only 17 she cant go now not yet Racheal: Beth I never want to say this I am so sorry Beth: Um how much has she got to live Racheal: 6 months Beth: No that to soon there must be a mistake Racheal: I wish I could change it but all we and you can do is help her fight this Beth: Yes I am sacred if I told her or the kids Racheal: I think if you tell someone that close to you maybe Tony or Irene Beth: Um no I just want a quite day ok Racheal: Yeh sure sorry Beth The Holden House Beth walks in nobody is there she picks up a photo of her and Mattie she starts crying The Pad Martha feels a pain in her tummy Martha: Ouch Matha starts to sreacm Jack comes to the recuse Jack: Martha just stay calm and I will call an amblance The Hospital Martha is now rushed into Labour Nurse Green: Martha your baby may only be 32 weeks but it will be ok Martha: What but it not a baby yet Jack: Martha just hold my hand Martha sreacms as the baby is pull out Nurse Green: It a baby Girl Martha: Jack did you hear that it a beutiful girl Jack: Yeh I wonder what we could call the baby Martha: Um what about your mother's name Jack: Um how about Bree Martha: Bree Holden I like that Will Beth tell Robbie that Mattie got Cancer? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jack4martha_forever Posted August 14, 2006 Report Share Posted August 14, 2006 Awwww...Bree Holden. How cute. Why did Martha say "What but it not a baby yet"? i didnt get that She was 8 months, of course its a baby Silly Girl. But im happy for Jack and Martha. Im not looking forward to these couple of bad things that happens to Martha Poor Mattie Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted August 15, 2006 Report Share Posted August 15, 2006 The Holden House All the Hunters/Holden are eating breakfast but Beth is very quite since she heard about Mattie Robbie: Mum are you ok you have been very quite since yesterday Beth: Oh it just that um Robbie: Come on mum tell us Lucas: How Mattie Beth: She fine she will need to stay at hospital for a few days Lucas: Can I see her Beth: No I think it best if I see her Robbie I want to talk to you something Privative Robbie: Um sure Robbie's room Beth: Um do you remeber the burns and sacrs Mattie got last year Robbie: Yeh Beth starts to cry Beth: She has....I cant say it Rob Robbie: No one is here Beth: She got Cancer Robbie: No way not now she only 17 Beth: Yes but there nothing we can do but support her I havn't even told Mattie yet Robbie: You havn't but are you Beth: But you need to come with me as I can't do it on my own Robbie: OK how long has she got to live Beth: 6 months Robbie: That to soon I mean like what are we meant to do Beth: Well we will make sure she got all the support she needs right now Robbie: Ok I will be right by your side ok Beth: Thanks They both hug as they both cries The Beach House Irene: Hey Darl Tasha: Oh hey Rennie Irene: So what up with you today Tasha: Nothing but working at the bar Irene: Oh I see Alf gave it to Beth then you can help her Tasha: Um yep see you Irene: Ok darl Irene sits on the chair and reads a letter from Barry she puts it in her box under the stairs The Pad Jack: Welcome Bree Holden this is your new home Martha: This is so great Jack you have done a great job Jack: Yeh we should make a chrising for Bree Martha: I don't know about that but yeh I need some time to think about it Jack: Yeh The seats Beth is walking along thinking about the last 6 months for Mattie life but finally agreed to see Mattie The Hospital Robbie and Beth walks to Mattie room Robbie: Mum will you be ok Beth: Yes sweetie Mattie: Hey Mum and Rob so what was about my faint Beth: It a long story and you will probbly hate me for this but I don't know if I can do this Mattie: Come on tell me how about if Robbie gose out Beth: Um ok sure but he knows as well Mattie: Fine then Robbie rubs Beth back Beth: Ok remeber last year when the expolsion happen Mattie: Yes I was baddly burnt Beth: Yes you were and Racheal told me what it was about Mattie: Mum please I want to know now Beth: Mattie what ever happens to you I will be right by your side even with this Mattie: Ok time is now tell me was happing to me Beth: You got...Cancer Beth starts to cry hard out Mattie: No I can't be dying this is too soon I want adult life how long have I got to live Beth: Only 6 months Mattie: No that way to soon Beth: I am so sorry Night time a car gose past 'I am back summer bay' Who is back in summer bay? Is Amanda friends with this person that comes back? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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