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Hahah Matilda poked you in the face! *sticks out tougne at Rhys*

Will Rachel be in it soon??? :(

Update soon!

Um soon as she is in NZ recovering for a doctor who just died

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The Beach House

Irene is watching telly Tasha comes in

Tasha: Hey Rennie

Irene: Hey love what are you and Rob doing today

Tasha: Nothing

Irene: It safe now I saw Mumma Rose running back to the city

Tasha: She still alive but didn't she caught

Irene: How am I meant to know

Tasha: You are the mum around here

Irene: Yeh well I couldn't get her couldn't I

Tasha: Yeh well see you

Irene: Ok love

The Holden House

Mattie and Beth talk about what Mattie would like to do before she leaves the world

Beth: Mattie what do you or want in the whole wide world

Mattie: Um Go to Sea world

Beth: Ok I can do that

Mattie: Thanks mum I need support but I know I will fight this cancer

Beth: I know you can you are a strong fighter

Beth and Mattie hugs

The Airport-The City

Racheal walks up to Kim

Kim: Hey how was NZ

Racheal: It was great in fact the best place I ever vist to

Kim: Good people there

Racheal: Yep so what have you and Summer Bay been up to

Kim: Nothing much but there been a mystery going around

Racheal: Sounds scary

The School

Dan and Sally disscus what happen to Mattie and need to keep this qutie from the students

Dan: Yeh

Sally: We will have to wait when Mattie and Beth comes back from sea world

Dan: Ok yeh I sugguest we should wait when Mattie decides to come back

5 months had past and already on the 6 month of Mattie life

The Beach House Irene hears a knock on the door she gose to opened it but there just a shock as we reveal who it was It Diana Fraser

Irene is shock by Diana arrival

Is this the last goodbye to our favortive teen as she dies in the arms of someone who is it?

I see no next part ;(

Here it is the next promo looks at a love one leaves and dies in the arms of someone

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Poor Matilda..Why does she have to die...Cant it have been Kim or someone else :(

Yay Rachel is in it!! Update soon! :rolleyes:

Well she gots all those burns and scars from the explosion but wait and see when I get to the explosion part and Kim will mostly die

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awwww...poor mattie, does she die? And whose Diana Fraser, is that Chloe's mum-in-law?

Please update soon :)

Yes Mattie will die in a heartbreaking place and yes Diana is Chloe's mum-in-law she is hell and but will Irene ever find out about Oliva but who knows but I have planned to kill Diana as one of the guest that will be killed off

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OMG!

Do you know how much I would love to give you a hug for killing Diana Fraser?!?!?

That woman is EVIL and she made Irene's life hell! Thank you thank you thank you so very much!!!

Awesome fic by the way.... Poor Tilly! Ah well.... Btw, if you can, please kill Kim too!

Can't wait for the next update! :D

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