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The Shocking Return


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The Diner Beth walks in and see's Irene

Irene: Hey love how are you

Beth: Fine do you mind if I tell you something

Irene: Um sure

The back of the counter

Beth: This will only be between me and you and my kids

Irene: Ok what is it

Beth: It mattie she got Cancer

Irene: What but she only 17 she cant go soon she not even my age

Beth: I know and all we can do is give her the most support and care she needs

Irene: Yeh Mattie (1990-2006) that is so so soon

Beth: Well 6 months of her life what the hell am I going to do when she gone

Irene: I will be there for you all the way even when Mattie gose

Both Irene and Beth hugs

The Masion

Amanda picks the phone up

Amanda: Hello this is Amanda Vale here

Rhys: When can I come is taking long

Amanda: Don't worry but you will need to hide from Beth

Rhys: Why

Amanda: Because Married and if you stuff her life I make your life hell

Rhys: Give it your best shot

Amanda: Yeh will why dont you get the hell away from here you little fool

The Bar

Martha is working as Beth got a few days off

Martha: Thanks grandad

Alf: No probblem love

Martha: Um make sure Bree is asleep when when you read a book or sing a song to her

Alf: Sure love

The Beach

Cassie: Oi Belle what are you up to

Belle: Um nothing I just came to see Drew

Cassie: Ok see you

The Holden House it night

Beth and Tony watch TV

Tony: What a day

Beth: Yeh I will be off to bed are you coming

Tony: Yep

There is a knock Beth gose and answer Beth is shock

Who is at the door?

Is Mumma Rose back to get tasha or has she teamed up with someone else?

Tasha is in danger?

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The Holden House

Beth: What are you doing here Rhys you broke my heart and now you are back

Rhys: No it not that Me and Sheally broke up

Beth: Good for you get the hell out of my life

Beth slammed the door and gose to her bed

The Bush

A figure walks up to a caravan and gose in inside It Mumma Rose

The close by bush

Tasha: Martha do you want to go on a camping trip with me

Martha: Well um sure we are we going

Tasha: Tomorrow maybe

Martha: Ok sure

Little they know that Mumma Rose is listing to them

The Diner

Beth walks in and sees Rhys

Beth: What the flammin hell you are doing here

Rhys: We need to talk

Beth: There is nothing to talk about what you did to broke my heart I am married to someone else now

Rhys: Good for you

Beth: What do you want just leave me alone you tart

Irene see Beth yelling

Irene: Hey what all the yelling about

Beth: Sorry Irene but look who back

Beth shows Rhys

Irene: Rhys what are you doing here

Rhys: Um nothing just seeing Beth

Beth: Look there is nothing to talk about

Rhys: Fine then

Rhys walks out

The campsite

Martha: Did you hear that Tasha

Tasha: Not sure I will just cheack it out

Martha: OK

Tasha gose and walk into the bush

Tasha: Hello anybody

Mumma Rose: Well I am here

Tasha spins around It Mumma Rose Tasha srecms but Mumma Rose tied her up and gose to her caravan

It looks like Tasha been kidnapped but Will Martha discoverd the truth about Mumma Rose return?

Will Rhys kidnapped Beth from Tony?

(This Is a quick promo but one death is before the big rip) At the end of October At Leah and Dan's wedding Annieverstery There will be the biggest rip ever and 6 will die and some geust will die so prepare for the showdown

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Guys I will do a short one as I have exams over the next two weeks ok

The Holden House

Beth throws a hissie fit because Rhys is back in town

Tony: Beth He will be gone in a flash

Beth: No Tony he wants me and he was a sicko

Tony: He was I know I will see him

Beth: No Tony what happens if you get in a fight

Tony: Don't worry I will knock him out

The Beach

Mattie walks along and spotted Rhys she walks up to him and has a go at him

Mattie: What are doing here you broke my mum heart when you left you made it clear you still loved Sheally

Rhys: Now Mattie why don't you go away

Mattie gives Rhys a good old slap in the face

The Patterson/Baker House

Dan: Leah why are you not at work today

Leah: I am on break today

Dan: Oh ok so me,you and Ryan will go out for the day

Leah: Ok also VJ will come as well

Guys this is not finished yet but it wont be updated in two weeks time but I may do it tomorrow but we will have to wait and see

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This will be the next part as I start school late today

Cotinues from The Patterson/Baker House

Dan: Ok let get ready

The Flat

Rhys: Hey It me Rhys I am going to Beth's tonight so I can get her but first I will get that Tony out the way

Dani: Dad do what ever you want you are still not going back to mum

Rhys: Yes well it wont be long

Rhys hangs up the phone

The Holden's House

Beth is alone she hears a nosie

Beth: Who is that Tony are you there

The nosie is making a huge rattle as Beth gets the phone and rings Tony

The Bar

Tony's phone rings it Beth

Tony: Beth slow down

The Holden's House

Beth: Tony I think there is someone is here

someone comes and grabs Beth around the mouth

Beth starts srecaming Tony runs to the car and drives so fast he almost knock someone over

The Holden's House

Tony: Beth

Rhys: Well well look at this

Tony: Tell me where is Beth and if you hurt her you will be dead

Tony hears Beth srecms Tony runs to her but rhys puch Tony

Tony and Rhys are having a fight Rhys gets crack up in the nose Tony wins

Tony sees Beth tied up to her window

Tony: Beth it ok I am here now the cops will be coming I think

Beth: I am so scared now and soon the whole suthurland's will be on me

Tony: No they wont us Holdens can run them over

The Fair

Mattie: Cassie do you want to come and go on the rollercoster with me

Cassie: Sure it your day and your money

Mattie: Yeh thanks for coming to spend the day with me

Cassie: That ok

Over the otherside of the fair is Dan and Leah also Ryan and VJ

Ryan: Dad look there the zoom tube

Dan: Yeh do you want a ride on that

Ryan: Yeh with VJ

Leah: Um if VJ comes then Dan will have to come

Ryan: Ok what about you

Leah: Um no I wont be coming on

Ryan: Why

Leah: Well I will be taking a photo of you coing down

The Police station

Jack: Well Mr Sutharland what are we going to do to you

Rhys: Look I never hurt Beth

Jack: Well I dont care I am putting you at rape charged

Rhys: Well cop you will never win

Jack: We will see

The street

Martha is walking baby Bree in a pram

Tasha comes up to them

Martha: Oh hey Tasha

Tasha: Hey where are you off to

Martha: Nothing but I can I ask you a big favour

Tasha: Sure

Martha: I was going to ask you and Robbie to be godparents

Tasha: Um if this what you want then yes we will be happy to be Bree godparents

Remeber when I said Mattie only got 6 months to live well 6 months is nearly there

Will Kane, Kirsty, Dani and Sheally return to summer bay?

Irene gets a blast from the past

Is Mumma Rose still out there or has she return to the city?

Um about the Mumma Rose kidnapped Tasha well Tasha eventally esapced but Mumma Rose comes back to see Tasha but shock that Tasha is not there.

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