katie343 Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Owww *whines* Did you have to stop right there. Please update soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacksthehottest Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 ohh that was soo good but one question why doesnt beth want Martha there?????? did i miss something? oh well great chapter, hope you update soon i can't wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xsianx Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 ohh that was soo good but one question why doesnt beth want Martha there?????? did i miss something? oh well great chapter, hope you update soon i can't wait to read more Yeh I was wondering why that was? Is it because of Jack? Anyway great chapter:) xx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Great chapter can't wait for the update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bizkit01 Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 Chapter 6 [The Shun] “Tasha, I need to tell you something…………….. “Robbie what is it” “Tash........., Jack here” “Wha……… OMG!” “What are we going to do, what am I going do” “I don’t know but, Mum said I should, something, anything to keep her out of sight” “What is he doing here? Is it me or does it feel like were in a parallel universe. There’s no way in hell we can keep them apart” “It’s not only you, babe, it’s not only you” “Robbie, we have a massive problem” “What” “Please don’t tell me that the two of you are planning on going out tomorrow” murmur “Well, yea it’s been ages, but now with Jack” “This is a nightmare; I can’t believe this is happening. Look you have to keep in the house.” “How you’d suppose, I do that?” “Look woman, I don’t care, just find a way and do it! …….. I’m going to bed” “Robbie!” Tasha calls [Doesn’t answer, instead slams bedroom door] [The Caravan Park] “Look, Mattie…… Cassie starts but Matilda cuts her off “You weren’t there; when I confronted him about his relationship with that ‘thing’ he didn’t even deny it. He cheated on me. “You don’t know that” Cassie stated “You didn’t she the letters” Mattie retorted “I mean, I know, I’ve been detached lately but it only because the whole marriage thing” “Look, I’ll walk you home” Cassie said “I don’t want to go home. I don’t want to see him” she replied “It’s 11.30pm, after a fight like that he’s bound to be asleep, c’mon Cassie utters stretching her hand to Matilda. “O.K” ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………... The next morning…… Matilda walks to kitchen, not before screaming….. “Jack! God what are you doing here” she asks “Why, does everyone keep asking that?” he wonders “The wedding” he answers “No, I meant what are you doing here, it 2weeks early” “To spent time, what else, look is there something you guys aren’t telling me” “Like what?” “Nothing, forget it” “Hey, where’s Luc” Matilda looks away “Oh sorry, I forgot you broke up” Shocked she asks “How’d you know about that” “I was there when you two had your argument.” “Speak of the devil” Matilda mutters and goes off to her room “Jack…” Lucas says sleepily pulling his brother into a bear hug. “Mate, you look bummed out.” “Couldn’t sleep, I would have seen yesterday I “Lucas started “I know……. wasn’t up to it” Jack finished “Want to go to the Surf Club later on” “Sure, love to” ‘”I’m going to shower” “Later, then” At this moment Tony and Beth come into the living room with Matilda who is looking very upset about something. [Rob/Tash’s House] “Is she still asleep” Robbie asks Tasha “Not anymore” Martha replies gleefully Rob and Tash look at each other “Mac, hey I was thinking we should stay in today” “Nonsense, we can go to the Surf Club” “NO!” “I mean their doing some work there, won’t you like to go somewhere like the Diner?” “Yea it will be a chance to meet up with Granddad. Thanks Rob” Martha says as she goes off to have a shower. [Few….. that was close…. Too close]“Something has to be done” Tasha says “Fine, then do it. I meant what I said last night Tash, I haven’t forgotten. I know she’s your best-friend but for the sake of peace and sanity please keep away from any place you know Jack will be.” “You do your part, I’ll do mine” “What part” Martha asks from the door ”Uh….. of the washing up Robbie quickly replies [Hunter/Holden House] “Luc, you coming” Jack asks “Yeah” he replies happy that he can get away from the lecture Tony and Beth are giving him and Matilda about working out there problems and trusting each other, not to give up. BORING! What’s the point of working out problems with Matilda when he can’t even get through to her? “Were you going” Beth asks worriedly “For a surf” they both reply and head of. [beth's P.O.V] I better call Robbie and make sure that Martha is not in the area........ ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Martha, Tasha and Robbie leave the house and head for the dinner. Lucas and Jack are heading towards the beach……….. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Will they run into each other?? ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Beth rushes over to the beach to prevent Jack from entering the diner after he decides to go there knowing before hand that Martha was there. But she is prevented by Tony’s romancing; will she make it on time? Will Robbie and Tasha be able to lure Martha away. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shawtyy Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 That was great! can't wait for the next update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasha Posted July 17, 2006 Report Share Posted July 17, 2006 OMG...this is really good. Why is it so bad for them to meet again. It'll be good if they do. They miss each other soo much, a reunion will be nice Please update soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_belle Posted July 18, 2006 Report Share Posted July 18, 2006 That was great cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicom Posted July 18, 2006 Report Share Posted July 18, 2006 Very good! Looking forward to more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
katie343 Posted July 18, 2006 Report Share Posted July 18, 2006 Very good! Looking forward to more! what Nicole said Can't wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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