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Glad Martha's awake bless Captain Jack Aww you mentioned Emily More soon please.

Great update. Jack and Martha are sweet. lol at Tony

I Love the banner and the robbie and Tasha avs! nice work

Lol! I laughed outloud at that. Overall that chapter was great! Poor Jack and Martha, not getting any action. Glad Jesse' been caught but for how long.... I agree with Puja throw Away the key into the Pacific Ocean

Great chappy! Aww Callie helped save (for now) Martha

Aww Carl sweet! and Go Jack. Haha Martha!

I did had 12 hours sleep!

^^Oh ok, but I still had the image lol I need sleep

Hey good morning lol I should be in bed. Glad Belles ok I hope the next person isn't Martha. When I read 19-60 lol I pictured a 60 year old man mugging Belle - which really isn't funny but I'm disturbed so I found it funny. A big, fat and wrinkly 60 year old man in army gear lol to blend in with his surrounding. Great writing looking forward to next chapter

I just read it...Wow. What else can I say? When I saw the pairing, I was like how is that going to be pulled off? but I can say you pulled it off really well. You described every scene really well and the storyline was Amazing. I would never have even thought about those two. Loved the title and the refrences to red all the way through Fantastic writing!

What you mean there was Rachel?! I didn't notice (haha Rosey) Aww Martha and Jck are soo cute. Does anyone want a magic wand? lol they're nice they are crisps Salt and Vinegar!

Welcome back Carl's a nice person isn't he? I hope to read more soon.

Thanks lol your giving me really nice compliments tonight/morning lol think I'm going to stick with year because I have confused myself! *go me*

I saw this and the first thing that came to mind was...they ate dinner lol Whenever I read your updates I'm always eating lol just had a nice sandwhich More soooon! Thanks for the two

Glad you got your internet back I hate it when I loose it for one day, So I can't inagin how you felt lol So yeah like the other said don't worry about updating till your ready Welcome back!

Sian thinks there should a sequal your great at writing. Gosh! while reading that my tummy rumbled I want some wedding cake lol Love that. Dan what a sweetie?! he sobbered up. Indi died Aww Poor Rhys Fantastic writing all the way through. You should be proud Write another story soon....please.... I'll get you soem of Jodi and Pauls wedding cake. I was invited to their wedding yep I was in the background dragging Paul through the fire exit s we could go on honeymoon. (Why did I write that?)

Chips Jacknotdying? Chips

You should know I'm eating the best chips ..EVER! lol Top Gun Mrs.Hyde *hmm* doesn't sound better than Sian Holden Go Away Martha!

Three years of memory gone! like Wham! gone. Poor Martha.

Lmao! I like drunk Dan! Well Dan can have Jodi as long as I have Paul Thanks for the teaser!

Sian thinks Jack should die... And Martha give him the kiss of life. like in Snow White I think

You made a mistake... it should be : NEXT TIME: What is Sian's answer? ^Just thought I would point that out lol excuse my randomness I feel really angry and happy all at the same time and upset. Good chappy!

Martha a cop! lol Naughty cops! Is there going to be more?

^^ See everyone I'm funny!