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OMG i can't believe he killed his own mother, Corey is a complete and utter loony! You know we are all waiting for Jack to come and save the day but please get a wiggle on, i can't wait! lol Great writing though, it so wasn't boring! In fact i'm glad that you thought of a different Corey family incident, very clever!

I do love all the tension between that stubborn pair, even if i do rant and rave about having them get together. lol. I'll be happy as long as you making it a happy ending! Of course Martha's worth it you flamin' idiot! lol Whats inside the envelope? You can't just leave it there!!!! Nooooooooooooo i think i'm gonna burst if you don't tell me lol

Well I think congratulations are definitely the order of the day!!! Well done Nicole for writing two of the best fics I have ever read (and i have read quite a few!) I am also so happy that you will put up another J&M fic, I can't wait!!! And i would also like to turn your attention to the fact that there have been 275 (276 if i post next ) posts! Woo hoo and you have had the most views on fanfic so I think you should be the one to receive a huge medal for all your hard work and dedication to your fics!

Ooh very good! I really liked how you explained Corey and Martha fighting, it was so funny: I just creased up laughing; true but harsh! Come on Alf, you go boy. Run!!! Save Martha and Irene

Awww finally a really cute and sweet moment between the soon to be lovers! How special! And i'm so glad to hear you've got a sequel, yippee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok now i take back everything i said on my last post about Warren probably being an ok guy! Doh...how totally wrong could i be! Poor Martha...

Oohh looking forward to the next chapter!! Great stuff but I hope Martha and Jack get to see each other soon.

Oh oh oh (*sniff sniff*) how lovely (*sniff*). This is making me sad knowing that its nearly the end of the fic! What am i going to do? You will have to write another one, and then another, and another! lol.

Well thats a bit cheeky I think i might have to set your army of little people on to you if you dont update tonight!! Ha see how that feels (little people prod you in leg) you have been warned lol :P only joking

Woo hooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to read it

Oh wow that was just perfect!! Very well written Nicole! Hope you do post the next chapter tonight, can't wait to read it!! What do you mean 'depends how I'm feeling'? Are you not feeling well? Or is it that you are going to see if you fancy keeping us in suspense for longer

Yey Dolly's back!! I've been waiting for what seems like forever for you to update this great fic! Hope your holiday was good! Great update by the way, but Doh Jack you silly fool lol

Very interesting fic! I'm intrigued already... All i can really say though is no-one actually knows who this Warren guy is and we are already hating him! It's not his fault that Martha is stringing him along because she can't admit her true feelings for Jack, she should just burst it out on live TV lol... how cool would that be

Ooh Martha sometimes I really just want to give that girl a good slap!! Pull yourself together woman!! You know you wanted to kiss Jack, its not fair to blame him coz you've already hurt him before Don't worry Jack, you just come here to me... I'll take care of you lol

Hey!! Absolutely fantastic chapters!! great writing! Loved Lucas impersonating Martha, that was hilarious i could just imagine Luc doing that sort of thing thought lol. Please update again soon!

Oh wow, that was absolutley brilliant...great tension!! And by the way i definitely think you should carry on writing more fanfics, esp about Jack and Martha! lol

Woo Hoo!!! Go Lucas Go Lucas!!! Shame on Julia, tut tut tut she should have known better not to mess with Lucas! lol Know all we need is for him to find Martha before she does something stupid!

Yeah definitely a super story, i really loved reading it! And great happy ending, hope you will be writing more fics!

Another excellent chapter!! It's so sweet and cute with all the little things Jack has done for Martha and she is only just finding out about them! Can't wait to read about when they finally meet up, so you have better post the next chapter asap, please!!!

Ooh great chapter!! Corey is such a fool, hope he gets what he deserves cause he shouldn't have thwacked her like that!

Excellent update!! I really hope Luc and Matilda figure whats been going on! then they can tell Martha before she does something stupid!!

please update tonight!!!!!! please please please lol

Hey Nicole pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee post again tonight!!! Pretty please, its so good

OMG you can't leave it like that, Martha's life is on the line!!!! I can't believe Corey turned on her like that, he is so evil. Martha shouldn't have cheated on him but he shouldn' have hit her like that You have to update soon, pleaseeeeeeeee

Brilliant chapters!! I hope Martha can eventually forgive him