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Its C...O...R...E...Y!!!!! Get your butts in there now before Martha passes out!!!

Great update! I really wasn't expecting any of that to happen...OMG Martha and Dylan???

Yep i agree...you can't leave it there; it is too good, in a good way lol i laughed so hard at Jack talking to the coffee machine, i just imagined him using the same tone of voice as he used that day at the races when he phoned Martha "Martha darling, its Jack speaking, where are you?"...i imagined Jack saying something like "Why thank you ever so much Mr coffee maker, how kind of you." and in front of a room full of patients too lol that was hilarious lol Well written

Oohh Nicole thanks soooooo much!! I'll read them now lol Brilliant, great stuff!! I was willing Lucas to remember Callum's name, yay go Detective Junior Holden! lol Thanks for posting two chapters you've made me a very happy girl

Oh WOW!! OMG what a great chapter, poor Martha, she's not looking too good Jack and McGrath had better get a plan sorted sooner rather than later! Go team Jack & McGrath!!

Nicole - you only like sean cause he is a complete nut case! LOL More fantastic updates Dolly, i'm really getting into the whole scandal you've got going; can't wait to read more

You deserve a very big well done (*claps*) This has been an excellent sequel, I have loved looking forward to reading the next installments and i can't wait to read your new one. it will help me get through the last few weeks of a stressful may lol!

Count me in with the whole stick bashing thingy! Lol This is a great sequel Dolly, I can't believe Jack is so taken by Serena...hang on, he is a bloke so should expect it really! *Sigh* why is it that men are completely oblivious to the evil side of pretty women? lol I don't know about anyone else but I keep imagining Serena to look like Amanda Vale LOL! It's very freaky, maybe its the whole evil persona with blond hair lol

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh god please let McGrath know somethings going on!!! Jack had better go and help him see whats happening at Irene's... Hang on Martha and Rene! Great suspense hanger

Excellent updates!! Please post more soon! Poor Jack, he's so cute when he's jealous...awww But i hope Martha doesn't fall for Callum and his lies, everyone can see what a creep he is, itsthe way he smirks at Jack and Lucas when Martha isn't looking (*muttering sinister plans to get Callum to rack off*)

Oh Alf and Ric, Corey didn't take the break-up at all well! Please someone...anyone...please help Martha and Irene Great update Baygirl, i love reading this fic!!

OMG i completely wasn't expecting that doctor to be Callum, I had forgotten about him! Damn him why can't he just leave those two alone?? But least now i understand why you picked this title for your fic lol...Jealous eyes, great can't wait to read more!

Oh for gods sake Jack you make me so mad sometimes!!!! You had the perfect opportunity to tell MArtha you loved her, but no you have to screw it up again!!! This boy has got some serious making-up to do lol Great update

Hummmm let me see! Well you've done it before, i don't know if it skipped your mind or anything, but you almost gave me a heart attack when you let Jack get shot......... and let us think he was dead for like ages before you updated!! lol i know you're only doing it on purpose, so i really should stop getting so carried away! Anyway i know you wouldn't do something too bad coz i remember what you said on someone elses fic... that you couldn't bear to write an uphappy ending with Jack or Martha cause it would make you cry! So now it wouldn't be very nice to go back on those words, would it lol

I really didn't think that was going to be the end! I kept scrolling down the bottom of the page hoping that i'd actually missed the end part, but to the complete hoprror of reading everyone elses replies it must be the end. Noooooooooooooooo please Dolly you must write a sequel, i would love to read what would happen after! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee pretty please!!

OMG wow!!! That so came out of nowhere!!! But good lets hope at least one good thing comes out from that poor guy getting run over; that Martha finally realises the truth! How can she be so blind? Argh lol

Woo hoo this fic has really made me feel so much better, thank you!! Its been great! and i adored the ending...awww

Yep, as anticipated another great start from Nicole...Well done!!! I'm loving it already, but why do i have this bad feeling that Jack's not going to be ok . I really hope i'm wrong *hint hint* don't do anything stupid now Nicole... you know, like something you may regret writing lol. Seriously though it's very good and i do feel sorry for Martha having to put up with Jack and his dangerous missions.

He he he lol... Well i guess i deserved that blow... damn i knew i should have stayed undercover for a while longer lol Honestly though, i do still mean that Rose and Jack would be suited IF it wasn't under the same circumstances i.e. if Rose hadn't of kissed Jack and let Jack kiss her while he so obviously wants Martha...her best friend! That doesn't mean that I want them to be together, no way! But Jacks not so innocent, he did go to kiss Rose too but she was the one to back off!

Wow OMG that was brilliant!!! Now i really want to know more, please post again asap

I got excited all for nothing!!! Jokes lol I can't help it if i can't wait to read the next installment Suppose i'd better wait til tomorrow then

Woo hoo i'm very happy that Rose has her old boyfriend, lets just hope M&J can sort through their differences!!!! Can't wait for the final chapter Dolly, but at the same time i'm sad that it will be the end

Me neither, sounds very exciting!!!

OMG OMG the suspense is killing me Please you have to let them be ok but i'm glad that Jack came to Martha's rescue!

Wow this is amazing, well done Dolly! I am actually liking the whole Jack and Rose romance/tension, whatever you want to call it lol. Even though i love and really want Jack and Martha to be together, you have put Rose across as a really sweet person; someone i could actually see with Jack. Ok i'm going to run for cover now before the rest of the J&M fans come out to get me lol