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A great start, well done! I like the story how its from Jacks POV, awww its good to know how he feels about Martha, and how he needs her. Hope she can help! Can't wait for the next update!!

Aww loving this fic! Can't wait till you post more That Lauren is so mean, Jack needs to throw her out then go sort things out with Mac. Hopefully Tash believes him and will help

OMG the suspense is killing me!!! Hurry Jack cause I bet Martha has made Corey even angrier now that everyone knows its him. I can't wait to see the look on Jacks face when he sees what Corey has done to Martha, yay go Jack and do the same to Corey!!

Grrr I don't like that Megan, why the hell did Martha leave her alone with Jack...I trust Jack but I don't trust Megan Martha still has to tell Jack her problem though, it may help them!?!

God that guy is seriously annoying! He doesn't need to pay anyone to punch him cause I would love to do it for free! lol And as for Martha can't she realsie that it is her reaction to Callum that is making Jack jealous, why can't she just believe Jack's suspicions, he is a cop after all! lol

OMG she stabbed her !! That woman is so evil and OMG working with Corey!!! That was definitely a surprise! How on Gods green earth can Jack just tell Martha they are over? (Alf moment). He has kids for gods sake, he can't go off sulking whenever there's a problem! Now get your butt over to Sal's...NOW!! Great fic, i'm hooked!

Daughters and ex's aside, that was really cute! You write the most amzingly tender, romantic scenes (*big romantic sigh*) Poor Martha and poor Jack, he is so not going to know whats hit him when he gets back I reckon Megan is telling a major fib though (well i hope she is), which would be the cruellest thing ever to do to a person. But then again, how else would she know Jack? Please don't leave me like this for too long, I have so many unanswered questions!

hey Nicole thank you for posting again, woo hoo!!! That was such an awww moment, then an ohhh moment! Jack you said it in one: what is happeneing to you? I'll tell you what, its unecessary jealousy, thats what! And I now officially take back any doubts about Martha betraying Jack. I'm so sorry Martha, i guess i forgot how much you still love Jack and you are only confused 'cause Jack keeps getting jealous over nothing (on her behalf anyway). I still hate Callum for calling when he did, talk about timing lol. not to mention all the other things he does. aargh he was not even in that chapter much and I still feel like punching him still!

All i have to say is that i'm glad that my personality is not Jacks then, cause they would never get together, let alone get together for long lol That was a really lovely chapter, i think we should definitely have more than just one chapter of mushy scenes between those two; they make such a great couple (*romantic sigh*)!

Good Luck with the exam! I'm sure it will go well, you seem to know loads about ICT from all the fab music vids you do lol Happy Birthday for tomorrow and do make sure you enjoy your day. I know how you must be feeling but it will turn out to be a good day, honestly! My birthday was on tues 9th May and I had a full day of double lectures that I had to attend to but i was really glad i went in cause everyone wished me happy birthday and i was around all my friends! Enjoy the day x

Wow that was unexpected!! A great chapter, well done Silly Martha jumping to conclusions like that, i can't believe she just left and with the kids too, poor Jack. All he did was come home from work! lol

That was very good Nicole, well done you have completely got me panicking now! lol I'm dreading the next chapter coz i bet Jack just wants to propose, and Martha is still reeling from the stupid lies that Callum told her. Why the hell would she believe Callum and not Jack, if she wanted to know if Jack still loved her then she should ask Jack, not Callum. He doesn't know what Jack is thinking, how dare he, he has got a real nerve saying those awful things to Martha!!! Grrrr Why can't Martha remember that Jack does still love her, he always had and always will. For gods sake he has saved her life twice and he doesn't need to say those little words to tell her he loves her, cause it is all the gestures that Jack does for her that tell her he still cares for her! Anyway, Martha should be careful about listening to Callum's advice on her and Jacks relationship from last time when he told her a pack opf lies! Ok ok i think i need to stop expressing my feelings about Callum and Martha, and Jack for that matter. i'm, getting too worked up and its drivind me crazy lol Nicole you are too good at this

OMG Nicole that was beautiful, absolutely beautiful! I never would have guessed she had cancer and you dealt with the situation perfectly, in fact the way you described her telling Jack Robbie and Tasha had me in tears, it was very emotional! And then I was laughing through my tears when Jack declared all his feelings for her, that was such a relief! I am sad that the next chapter is the last but it has been a wonderfully heartwrenching story, i loved it and i'm sure i will love the final chapter just as much

Oh no not another argument but this one sounded really serious, Jack you've got some making up to do boy. But, hang on a sec, Martha isn't the innocent one here! she didn't exactly warn Jack that it was Callum! it was like she wanted to have a massive row so that it would give her an excuse to split with Jack, blaming him in the process so that she can run off to Callum! Grrr... And as for Callum, god he make me so angry, i bet he planned everything, i bet he knew Jack was there all along...

OMG!!!! (*picks jaw off the floor*) Martha you flamin' idiot, what in in the name of god have you gone and gotten yourself into??? How could she ever have the need to sleep with anyone else when she has Jack??!! Oh my life!! Well, i suppose if she doesn't want him then send him my way sweetheart, cause i know how to appreciate a real man! LOL Great start but as Nicole said don't keep us waiting too long for the next!

Aww Martha and Jack have babies!! Aww so cute, they must be gorgeous like their parents lol Love the children squabbling dialogue, great writing and am looking forward to hearing what this Jessica has to say for herself cause this is one relationship that will be very hard to break up lol (i hope)

I was thinking the same thing! God Callum is so annoying, why can't he just stay away from Martha! Aargh!!! Now Jacks going to find them laughing behind the rocks or something and get even more jealous, damn it.

I completely agree with you Baygirl!! I've had the feeling that Martha is going to do something stupid with Callum as well but I'm in denial! lol Well i was until you brought it up, now I'm getting apprehensive as to what i'm going to read next! But its still going to be Callums fault, whatever she does What are we like lol it must be down to Nicoles amazing skills. Great stuff Nicole, we all really appreciate your wonderful fanfics

Yay go Jack!!! I knew he wasn't a good cop for nothing! I hope he goes in there and punches Coreys lights out! lol Another great update, thanks

Aww bless Peter is such a great guy! I hope Jack just takes his advice and that Martha doesn't get brainwashed by Callum the freak lol Great update (I'm sneaking a quick break at work to read this by the way 'cause its so good lol)

That is really really good! Poor Martha, and poor Jack! Great suspense hanger and very well written. I really was able to relate with Martha from the way you had wriiten it and even though I don't know whats wrong, I can understand why she's finding it so hard to tell her best friends the problem.

Great update again But Martha has got her eyes on the wrong man, how could she ever take her eyes off Jack!!! tut tut tut lol Read your new fic and its a great start, well done!

OMG OMG Dolly that was brilliant!! i was really gripped, i could take my eyes off the page. I can't believe what happened to Martha and Jack wasn't there to protect her Please update soon, they both need to get out of there some how!

Wow I'm so glad that you have decided to post this fic, i've been waiting ages and it is absolutely amazing! I love Martha and Jack fics and this one is really adorable. Jack so wants Martha and in a public place...tut tut tut...whatever shall we do with him? lol

Brilliant! but Argh!!!! why isn't she telling them whats wrong, she had better tell Jack in the next chapter or i'm going to scream!! lol Martha is either pregnant or she's had some sort of surgery on her belly thats making her sick... or, OMG please tell me she didn't have an abortion?!? no that would be awful especially if it were Jacks No no she is definitely pregnant and i hope its Jacks Next chapter would be greatly appreciated