linzie_mac01

I'm so glad that they managed to sort a few things out in that chapter and that Jack didn't have a major go at Martha! Phew that was a relief. I hope it is not Jack who has his feelings hurt again, poor guy. Although, if it is Martha then that means the data will go really well for Jacky boy! Humm, Maybe Martha deserves to go chasing after Jack, she needs something like that to happen for her to blurt out her feelings for him! Please update soon

I cannot believe this is happening, how can Martha just set each other up like that! I think it definitely is a bad thing now that Jack knows that Martha didn't tell him, i bet he's going to think that she didn't like the love they had before. Thats why she hasn't told him; because she realises that she didn't actually love him as much as he loved her Oh poor Jack, that isn't rue and Martha needs to tell him the truth about her real feelings before Jack does something stupid

That was lovely! I don't know about anyone else but i really did need a good Jack-and-Martha-together-with-no-hassles fic! Thanks for posting it

God that was awful! I'm so sad right now because martha is being so mean. How could she say all those things to Jack knowing that she was going to break his heart all over again! I actually want to give Jack a hug 'cause that must have hurt so badly, hearing those mean things. And the way you described how Jack reacted just made me feel even worse Please update soon, but if i were Jack, nothing Martha could say would make anything better after her mean comments!

Those last two chapters were absolutely fantabulous! I really loved the first kiss flash back *sigh* it seems like it was only yesterday when that happened, but yet they have both gone throught so much since then! I cannot believe you dropped that bomb shell on us about Brett so wasn't expecting it to be him, the creepy slimeball, and the cheek of him to come round and expect her forgiveness that he's changed! Urgh, didn't he realise that she would remember sooner or later? Please update soon, i'm actually really mad at Brett for this!

Yay another great chappie, aww they are so sweet bless them Oh i forgot to mention that i'm gratful you used the diet coke

Yippee, a fab start i loved it, oh and it has to be Martha, who else would have those blue eyes lol

Aww that was the sweetest, Jack is so tender As i was reading the part with them dancing, take that came on on my ipod and i started swaying too. kinda ironic as well; "A million love songs later, and here i am trying to tell you, that i care..." i just thought that it was the perfect song for Jack to tell martha his feelings lol! Right now i'm thanking Henry for requesting their dance, 'cause otherwise they wouldn't have, and now Martha realises what she wants. All we have to do now is to get Richard to fall for Jack so that Henry goes after him too he he he

Sounds like a very very good storyline, although any story with semi-naked Jack is always going to be good Oh and i'm liking the whole diet coke moment (goes off to turn TV on) i'd replace that guy for jack any day!

That whole chapter had me in stiches I just love it when Jack does little things to make Martha jealous, she deserves it! Hopefully she will realise that she can't stay lonely and unloved and unwanted and unlusted (is that even a word?) forever! Especially when she must know that Jack totally wants to rip her clothes off there and then. I mean who could resist such a look from Jack He just wants to protect you Martha!

That was a fantastic fic, great writing, well done Absolutely loved the ending too

Waa Hay! They were the funniest two chapters i have read in a while! I'm going to miss Tasha when she leaves, but hopefully that void will be filled with lots and lots of lovely Jack and Martha teasing

That was so goddamn hilarious! my sides are hurting so much. I had a wierd moment when reading the last part with Martha and Jack in bed oops i mean on the bed I had the song from the little mermaid in my head repeating over and over, the one sebastian sings...go on and kiss ze girl! And that made me laugh even more! Oh please ignore me, I'm having a strange day.

Yes Yes Yes! Finally Martha's seen how much Jack turns her on The descriptions were incredible, i was actually blushing for her when I realised Jack had been watching her fantasising lol Hopefully now she will act on those feelings and completely ravish him when he's least expecting it (well i can dream if Martha can!) lol

I second that! More Jack and Martha scenes!!! Another fantastic and long-awaited chapter, great work!! Hope Jack spills all to Martha though so she doesn't marry Eamon!

I agree! Please Nic come on here and update date this fic missy :glare: I need to know what Ricardo is going to do