Zetti

I do not know why but I dont think Liam is Bella's biological father but I do think its cute the way Bella speaks Italian makes me melt Poor little Ash! looking forward to more

My heart did actually break then for my poor Dex! but at least April managed to break through his natural reaction which is to put his defences up and provoke a response even if it was just an emotional response. I loved the chapter and it was well written as usual Jen Looking forward to more

I really hope Liam doesn't have leukaemia but I do think he might have it. I did like the way Ella clung to Roman despite the act that she put on for Rachel. Nice chapter & well written as usual Hope you update soon.

I am intrigued to know who Bianca's new man is.. Looking forward to more

Lincoln Lawyer.

Ah the wedding, I have to admit I didnt really think about who's wedding it was and then when it turned out to be Ruby's, I was like oh? Really? but I loved the chapter and I like the fact that despite everything, ruby and xavier are happy together, that is what really counts. at Riley not wanting to wear the dress and Charlie using no cake to bribe her, that reminds me of someone I know Looking forward to reading more soon x

Great chapter. Looks like Rola are getting closer & closer each day. Awkward but funny moment with Georgie Looking forward to more.. Well done x

Oh wow..I loved the chapter so much..it put a smile on my face

Ah Heath..he has been on the screen in UK a lot more and I love seeing it. Its refreshing, different and I truly do think he's one of the best characters on the show. He seems to be different when he is not a RiverBoy. The RiverBoy side of him is slightly more robust than his demeanour when he was with Bianca, Darcy (seems to have disppeared but I hope not because Heath is just that little bit more cuter when he has her around him ) and more recently April. Heath and April are not my favourite as I prefer Bianca and Heath but here is my view on April and Heath regardless. Heath is no angel. He's about 25 I would say & April is about 18 which is about 7 years of a gap but I am a firm believer that ages really doesnt matter. It's been so long since I have liked April since she's been a bitch towards Dex & previously to Xavier which annoys me because Xapril was my favourite couple in the show. I like Heath and I always have since he entered the show. It's no secret that hes my favourite but I do not however like him with April. She's immature & Heath has already told her that he isn't a relationship kind of guy. As well as that I prefer Heath with Bianca & I really do want them together. Meanwhile Heath & April in a no strings relationship will not work especially since its obvious to me that Heath is hung up on Bianca..so I'm not in favour of Heapril but I do want to see Heath happy so if April is gonna be that person at least short term then I can sort of accept but I don't like it. As I said earlier, I love Darcy with Heath as he is not an all round bad person, he may make mistakes and doesnt always learn from his mistakes but at the same time he is one of the most interesting characters IMO to enter the bay which is why I am glad he is a regular character. It would be a shame not to explore Heath and who he really is. I look forward to more of him and now I will shut up and go do something more productive (like feeding my kittens )

Sorry! I read this a few days ago but lost track of time and didnt comment but here I am.. I loved the oneshot, it was interesting to say the least. Your characterisation of Dex is pretty much spot on as usual. Hope you do write more Dexy soon

So Brax is not the father, I wonder if we do find out who is the father. Charlie went to find him..lets hope they manage to talk it out.. Hope to see more soon

Whoa...that was a tad harsh in my opinion, I mean fair enough he's not been the best partner or father but to compare him to his own father is harsh IMO. I hope there is nothing wrong with Isabelle though.. I would hate to see that Looking forward to more

Bella sounds adorable..really really sweet! I hope Brax gets his head out of his ass and realises how insensitive that was! Hope to see more

This just sums up Rola...whatever happens, they always come back to each other in one way or another..and again..that was a really sneaky line...and you know why... I did love the condoms line.. I burst out laughing..pretty sure I scared my kittens.. I loved it and I am looking forward to more.. (especially racy fluff..and by the way, not a request but a demand..! ) Well done Tele xx :wub:

Er...please please dont make Brax the father? Please? I would love it to be Heath's..please? Looking forward to more x

Aww its finished I loved it & I wanted to read more but it was fantastic & a fitting ending. Well done xx

Er..Brax is going to the city to pick stuff up? Doesnt he hire people for that? That sounds dodgy and I hope it isnt... Bianca and Charlie are getting on better now which is great. I love seeing that..

Er..he's proposing? A tad soon maybe? Bit of a jump.. Aww Charlie was there to help Bianca deliver the baby..hoping it's a good bond for them both to move on with their relationship get back on track

Officially caught up with both stories. I really love Jacob. He is so adorable and one of the cutest kids in a fanfic. *sighs* ah I love him. Riley is a handful but there's always one.. Paige sounds cute I really don't like the idea of Bianca having Brax's baby and I really would like Heath to be the father but that won't happen. As for the Ruby/Matt/Xavier thing..I'm rooting for Matt personally. Love the story and really looking forward to the next chapter Zetti xx

Awww April! I am so glad Xavier is okay.. Looking forward to more (& apologies for it taking me so long!)

Finally caught up..and this is so hilarious! Keep it up pembie

Ah that was a nice fluffy chapter to read..I have missed the family interaction..but I want racy fluff. In fact I demand racy fluff..and no excuses about being 'too innocent' because you are not fooling anyone! but you also have to make Liam better..otherwise I will set Lily on you... Hehe...reminds me of my Lily He better do...and soon... Blackmail...sneaky Lily.. Looking forward to more Tele xx

"Or something." Very intriguing...liking the chapter.. I really enjoy reading your chapters...looking forward to more..

That was not fluff. but it was well written.. Poor Ella.. please don't make it too bad.. Hope you update soon.. x