TelephotoMarigold

Wow this was very powerful. You captured the emotions really well. I can understand where Nic is coming from and making Aden the knight in shining armour was good. Suited the song lyrics you chose. Well done!! Tele xx

^^Ouh, what's your bad feeling??

^^ Oops! I guess I should have commented! I'm loving this fic and I want more.... Tele xx Thanks Tele! Full chapters up now! My computer went all funny and posted the chapter before I was finished typing!! x x x x x I loved it... (Both halves! ) ...more soon please... Poor Aden and poor Jamie and poor Belle... Tele xx

^^ Oops! I guess I should have commented! I'm loving this fic and I want more.... Tele xx

What a splendid update.... Very well written... Tele Xx

I love love love this story..... I need more updates..... (Please...!!!!!!) Love Tele xx

Well.. when Elliot is gone that is the end of the story.... do you want it to end so quickly??

Wow... I'm glad Aden was there... I'm always blown away by how good your writing is Gee... Keep going.. Love Tele

I will...

He's just explaining what is gay....

I hate Nic in this.... but you write Evil Nic well! And the scenes with Belle are heartbreaking! Very well done... Love Tele xx

Ah.....This was a nice story... I really liked it! Tele

Yay! An update... It's brill I just want to keep reading... Love Tele xx

THIS IS VERY VERY GOOD!! I can't wait for the next part! Love Tele xx

Yah!!!!!!!!! That was so sweet!!! I think I'm becoming addicted to Niff... Tele xx

Thank you all for your comments... This was the first time I ever wrote anything between TWO men and no Gee, I don't usually have thoughts like these..... Love Tele xx PS Update coming soon!!

no.. they are home and will appear in the next update!

Good chapter... I think your writing is powerful and tremendous and you write this subject matter excellently and ok.. you included Roman so I officailly love you!!! Tele xxx

Complaints... all I get is complaints.....

Ah...Thanks!! Tele XX

Ok I'm commenting as ordered requested.... I love your writing and I love how you've improved so much. This story is great and I can't wait for an update. Love Tele xxx

No, no more. I said that was the last chapter! In the three years later part Ruby will be 23 and Ava will be 7 You see you start a simple story and reach the end but we still want more... You will have to do a sequel now you know!! Loved it all.... Tele xx

Ah! That was sweet... aside from the drug thing of course! Tele xx