TelephotoMarigold

OMG! WOW! thanks so much! that's an amazing compliment! Tele xx

My god you were quick... hang on weren't you supposed to be watching a dvd??? .... ( Now can I have an update? )

I'm voting for me cuz I've run out of vodka.... oh? I wasn't nominated? Ok, then the goat because I saw it looking at my socks... Tele xx

Ah Bless... you are my offical Number one fan again Love Tele xxx

Ah.... an almost complete happy ending... This was a very good story..! Tele xx

Chapter 5 By Tessalove.... "Hey” Nicole whispered seductively “Hi Nicole what are you doing here?” “I just thought I’d pop round to see how my favourite police officers doing” She winked “I’m pretty busy at the minute” “Oh, Are you working on this big mystery?” “Yep, it’s a tricky one” “Do you have any leads yet? Any suspects?” she fluttered her eye lashes “Nothing I can discuss with the public yet” “Oh I think you can tell me, After all I heard Ruby’s been let out, I think you owe me, don’t you?” “I can’t Nic, this is an important case” “Ohh” She pouted while unbuttoning her shirt, she pulled it of and threw it across the room revealing an electric blue bra, her jeans didn’t stay on much longer revealing the same shade of underwear “Well I think I can trust you, We have a few suspects at the minute” Angelo said between gasps and Nicole’s lips “Like who” her voice was quiet and she breathed into his ear every time she spoke, it sent chills down his spine “I think Yugo’s in on it, There’s just something about that guy” “Ok, Thanks” She grinned dressing herself again, “Do you mind if I take a picture?” “Why?” Angelo sounded confused “I’m putting together a scrap book” “Of every one you’ve slept with?” “Yeah, I’m gonna try and break a record” She smiled “So many guys in the one town, must dash, got plenty more to go, Bye!” She smiled and left leaving Angelo feeling rather used She skipped out of the front door and of round to Yugo’s house hoping Marta wouldn’t be in, She thought she could get the low down on the whole mystery thing as well as breaking a world record! She knocked on the door and Yugo answered “Hey” She winked “Is Marta here?” “No..” Yugo said cautiously, “She’s gone out to the farm, she won’t be home for a while” “Oh goody!” She grinned and pushed Yugo into the house and they landed on the sofa “What are you doing?” “Going for a world record and I’m also pretty curious about this mystery thing, Do you know anything about it?” she asked while undressing Yugo, who didn’t seem to mind “Not much, I just know it has something to do with that Alf!” “I’m not going there” She shivered at the thought “So what’s this world record?” “Nothing really, but thanks for the help” She grinned “Now smile for a picture” She put her head against his and the both smiled and she took the picture “Bye” She skipped away “Ok two done, Now where? There isn’t a chance I’m going to Alf!” she said to herself while skipping along the beach “Oh Xavier!” she called as she seen the young blonde boy “Hey Nic, you ok?” “I’m fine thanks, Would you like to help me with something?” “Sure what can I do?” “Just come round to my place with me, You’ll find out then” “1,2,3 smile!” The camera flashed “Thanks, can you find another guy and send them round” “But ah Nic are you sure?” “Yes! It will help me, and anyway what guy wouldn’t want to?” “Ok, I’ll send someone round as soon as I can find them” “Xavier? Can you spread the word as well, I’m sure we can get some sort of queue going” “Ok” He said awkwardly but obeying the request After about an hour Nic had a long line from her bedroom door all the way out to the caravan park, After about 20 minutes with each Xavier would shout next, Nic would take the picture and the next erm, assistant would enter the room. Next up was Romeo, “Hi Nicole” “No time for small talk, come on hurry up! You’d think I have all day!” “Ok thanks now, Bye!” Romeo was about to leave “Oh wait, we need a picture!” “Um, What for?” “Evidence duh!” Nicole had been through about 130 guys, she honestly didn’t know there were that many guys in Summer Bay! “This is that last one” Xavier called “Thank God I’m exhausted!” she moaned “Aden?” She gasped as the door opened and he walked in “What? I’m allowed to help too, right?” “Oh yeah of course, I just didn’t think you’d want to” “I’m always here to help you Nic” “Ok then” “And were done! Thank God, I’m so tired!” “How many guys have you had up here?” “God knows! I’m glad there’s no more though!” “Sorry Nic, One more has arrived” “Ughh great! Aden you better go, Smile first!” “Bye Nic, do you want to come round for dinner later?” “Sure, See you later!” she smiled “Come in” She yelled one last time “Hey Nic” “Geoff? You want to help? I thought you’d be against this” “No of course not, I’ll always be here for you, in whatever way you need me” “I think I might enjoy this one” She grinned

Loved working with you all.... Tele

Yay... I have vodka.... I mean... I'm in the BB house.... This is laugh out loud funny.... Tele xx

Name: Tele Age: never wise to ask a lady her age.... or me... Celebrity Crush: Christian Bale Wish: To get a job as a writer.... oh and I er do stupid things when I drink vodka... Special Skill: I write poety

Oh my god El... what are you doing to us??? More now... Tele

<muhwahhaha> Now what a plot twist that would be........ *Tele goes off and writes something*

I'm leaving a comment... see.... I should be off doing stuff but hey... I'm here and Finally you've updated... I've been waiting forever.... This is REALLY REALLY Good and I'm, loving it.... More please.... Tele xx

Two writers of such calibre? Must be time I did an update... ya forgot about me!!! <she says hopefully >

Ouh... Why did she promise to only read one page a day???? Doesn't she know that we are waiting to see how it turns out? Tele

Ah!! Just you try killing off your main Character because you're fed up writing about her and then see what happens.... Ok, so I was actually planning to bring her back in the sequel anyway but that is beside the point.... Great Updates Everybody! Love Tele xx

* Mike knew what he was doing.... * I'm really bad at fight scenes.... but there might be one coming soon... * I knew exactly what I was doing choosing the warehouse...... <rubs hands together evily>...... and anyway this story is on a tight budget.... * Double updates? I do have other stories to write you know... *Who says that he saves both?

I love this fic... You are getting so good at this. You are good at building up the tension making us want the climax of the ending while at the same time not wanting it to end... I love love love the dedication... (let me guess you want another Niff fic......?) Tele cc