I.....i...i...i can't believe you! How could you do that!
Poor Martha, Poor Jack, poor everyone! Except that horrible, annoying,disgusting Alec.
I can't believe you made Jacky boy leave, after everything they did the night before, after everything they said to each other, after them basically getting together..
Oh Martha, you have to find him! And you have to stop him, either way, you can't let him go! If he doesn't want to go back to Summer Bay then you can go with him to wherever he wants to go.... Why does Martha have to be in a relationship with Alec, if they weren't together it would make it so much easier, then maybe Jack would be there with Martha right now..
Instead of running away, after he just found his soul mate! And now it's just been taken all away....
Okay now Jack, your a bloody idiot! Why would you do that I mean c'mon! Are you serious, you just had sex with her, and then you just leave. Like you actually LEFT, without saying goodbye, just a stupid little note, you could at least woken her up. Even tho she wouldn't of let you go, but that's a good thing, cos then you would be there now!!!!
Anyway, that chapter, was written extremely well! Your such a good writer.
More please
EDIT:
Wow... I didn't know I wrote such a big review And one more thing, I was getting a bit confused, But he actually did leave right? The start of it was a dream? And then it came present, and he actually left? Lol, I don't just want to write all that, and he didn't even leave, that would be so embarrassing! haha!