christine king Posted July 10, 2015 Report Posted July 10, 2015 Story Title: The Right To Stay In Summer BayType of story: LongMain Characters: current cast but mostly the teensOther Characters: Clare, JohnGenre: Family/Romance, Hurt/Comfort, DramaDoes story include spoilers: yesAny warnings: yesBTTB Rating: TSummary: The teens of summer-bay are going through hardships, relationship drama, finding love, lust and everything in between but when a new girl arrives, she match-makes, falls for the wrong guy and finds love with the right one but her family life is anything but stable when she realizes everything she wants is in jeopardy, what will she do? Is she a danger to herself or a friend to others, just who is this new girl? The going back in time thing A girl is seen standing in the computer lab at the school, she lights a match and drops it to the ground, she flees the room and rushes outside watching, she see's in the distance a couple of people walking towards the school, she starts running away from the school, the people are approaching the school but don't see the girl run off, the people get close enough to the school to smell smoke and they spot the flames, they quickly call the fire department to tell them a fire is developing at summer bay high school and also ask what they should do, the fire department advise them to stay clear of the fire until they get there, the people watch the fire burn while waiting for the fire department, The fire department arrive and put out the fire, thankful it only burned down three classrooms and the computer lab. The fire department begin their investigation over who started the fire and why. Seven months earlier
Guest Posted July 10, 2015 Report Posted July 10, 2015 Interesting startI look forward to moreupdate again soon
christine king Posted July 11, 2015 Author Report Posted July 11, 2015 Chapter 1 A RoadA car is driving on a road, we see a father and his daughter, the daughter is asleep, the father smiles at her before focusing on the road again, the girl starts to stir and opens her eyes, she asks where they are? her father tells her they are about an hour away, the girl says it feels like forever since they left, the father says that its only been a 6 hour drive, the girl thinks its been too long already, the father turns the radio station while the girl nods off back to sleep. Leah's HouseZac, Evelyn and Oscar are eating dinner. Zac: so what did you guys do today?Oscar: I went to see MaddyZac: and how did that go?Oscar: fineZac: just fine?Oscar: yeah, Evie can you past the peas?Evelyn gives Oscar the peasEvelyn: so what did you do?Zac: caught up on some paperworkEvelyn: why its not like school has started yet?Zac: you might get school holidays but teachers work all year roundEvelyn: but your principal this year not a teacherZac: yep which means I have my work plus making sure all the teachers have their work doneEvelyn: that sounds like a lot of workZac: hopefully the kids will be good this year and I'll keep saneEvelyn: haha, very funnyEvelyn, Oscar and Zac laugh together
Guest Posted July 11, 2015 Report Posted July 11, 2015 Great chapter I look forward to more.Update again soon
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 11, 2015 Report Posted July 11, 2015 Interesting story, looking forward to seeing what you do with it.
Inactive User Posted July 12, 2015 Report Posted July 12, 2015 Great chapterLooking forwards to the next chapter Update soon please xx
christine king Posted July 13, 2015 Author Report Posted July 13, 2015 Chapter 2Angelo'sAndy enters and finds Josh studying at one of the tables.Andy: heyJosh: hiAndy: why you studying here and not with that girl of yours?Josh: I need to study and I keep getting distractedAndy: yeah I know the feelingJosh: I'm sure you doAndy: so how is your relationship?Josh: were getting there, there was a lot of hurt and pain that we need to get throughAndy: yes that you causedJosh: I know thatAndy: just saying, I have a stable relationship for once and yours isn't at the momentJosh: yep it feels like the universe is fallingAndy: oh, ha-haJosh: just kidding I know you've changed and its for the better, Hannah's lucky to have youAndy: you know at one point, us as brothers were dating from the same familyJosh: I remember Andy: but you'd like to forgetJosh: I messed up with Evie and lost Maddy and shes only just given me another chanceAndy: you know she was only dating Oscar to make you jealousJosh: well it worked and I realized I still loved her and shouldn't of let her goAndy: don't worry, you guys will be fineJosh: since when have you liked MaddyAndy: since I want you to be happy plus shes not that badJosh: I'm going to tell Maddy you said thatAndy: I'll just deny itJosh: of course you will, you cant face the truthAndy: yeah yeah, whateverJosh: but thank youAndy: what for?Josh: for being on my sideAndy: I'm your brother, I'm always on your sideJosh: sometimes a little too muchAndy: hey!
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 13, 2015 Report Posted July 13, 2015 Josh dating Maddy again is interesting.
Guest Posted July 13, 2015 Report Posted July 13, 2015 Great chapterI agree with RR1 ^I look forward to more update again soon
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