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Great start :) Update soon please xxx

And yes you just post the next chapter and the rest- it goes on this thread :)

Thank you! Sorry it took me so long to answer. I'm glad you liked it.

Wow, this is a really great idea and very well-written, looking forward to more!

And what Jarliefan said.

Thank you! Glad you're enjoying.

REALLY enjoying this. The concept is FANTASTIC ......

and I especailly love April trying to deal with her OCD in the middle of ALL of this [including her appreciating the cleaning products more than the perfume Casey got her]

Thanks! Poor April... :)

This is incredibly stark and incredibly well-written.Keep it up!

It is kind of stark, isn't it? I'm so glad you're enjoying, I have plenty more in store....

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This fic is soooooooooooooooooo intriguing !!!!

Cooool that they called the dog Polly.

Casey doing what he had to do to protect his new family was intense !!! …….. and his laments about not having his brothers around is VERY understandable in uncertain times like these.

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I have such a thing for dystopian societies, particularly ones where the kids have to run things. I like the combination of characters you've got. Casey being forced to take the lead, April more subdued - battling her own demons silently - and then Jett who's become Casey's right-hand man.

You've managed to create a certain atmosphere - bleak, empty, reflective - in this fic. I like the little insights we get into how each of the characters are coping. I really feel for April, and adore the fact that it was Casey who realised what was going on, Darcy and Jett too young to understand.

I'm really intrigued as to where you are going with this.

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