Danni02 Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Good start Ah dear Ruby and Casey got detention....not good haha. Update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Amazing start! Update soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 Amusing start.Ruby dreaming about Casey made me smile. Quote
JosieTash Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 LIKING it so far, especially ……. "Lovely grand entrance" Casey said "I nearly fell on my bottom" Ruby whispered "It was still cute" Casey whispered back Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 21, 2011 Report Posted September 21, 2011 A great start and first chapter ... looking forward to more. Carina xxx Quote
Guest Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 A great start and first chapter ... looking forward to more. Carina xxx Thanks Carina but that's not Chapter 1 that's what is called a prologue Chapter 1 is coming soon sorry if people think this is an update Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Oh boy.Xavier and Dexter being jealous of Ruby and Casey made me laugh.Intrigued to see where you go with it. Quote
JosieTash Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 REALLY liking this, especially ..... “I hope we don’t get detention tomorrow but then again I hope we do” Casey replied “CASEY!” Ruby said “What? I like you” Casey replied “And I like you too” Ruby said “You we’re interrupting my teaching do you want double detention?” Miles said “Well I kind of like Casey” Dex asked Quote
HighwayUnicorn Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 I only said chapter 'cause it's still a chapter to me ... the first chapter ... just not chapter one ... it makes sense in my little mind, honest. Another good update though << See, I'm too scared to say chapter now ... I look forward to more. Carina xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted September 22, 2011 Report Posted September 22, 2011 Another fab chapter! Loved it Update soon xx Quote
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