Charlie&Brax_lover Posted July 16, 2012 Report Posted July 16, 2012 Loved it! Please update again soon can't wait to see more
Phoebe Posted July 17, 2012 Report Posted July 17, 2012 Hey! I have sent the next chapter to Sophie so a new chapter should be up soon!
Phoebe Posted July 23, 2012 Report Posted July 23, 2012 Thanks guys! Sorry it's taken so long! I have been a bit slack! Chapter 3! Why? Why was I so mean to April yesterday? I just totally blew my chances, didn’t I? Sometimes I wonder why I even try! I walk into the house slamming the door behind me,causing Sasha to scream. “Don’t worry Sash! It’s only me!” I yell. I hear stomping coming from the kitchen. In no time at all a very annoyed looking Sasha is standing right in front of me,with her hands on her hips. “Do you mind? You’re not the only one who has had a bad day!” I roll my eyes. “Right! What petty little problems are you having?” I ask slumping myself onto the couch. Sasha slaps my arm hard. “Ow!” I say rubbing my sore arm. “I think I’m getting a bruise!” Sasha smiles slightly. “Good! Maybe you’ll remember not to a jerk around me when I’m upset!” I sigh. “I should report you to the police for assault!” I say still rubbing my sore arm. “Yeah! Well I should call the circus and tell them one of the freaks have ran away!” Sasha spat cruelly. “Sometimes I wonder why I talk to you…” Sasha sighs. “Sorry Dex, it just Casey Braxton is getting on my nerves! And I just don’t know what to do.” I think about what Sasha has just said. The last time a boy got on her nerves she ended up dating him… I honestly don’t want my little sister dating a Braxton! I mean it was border-line with Stu, but Braxtons are a whole new level! “Maybe you should just ignore him…” I suggest, hoping it’s enough to keep her away from Casey Braxton! *** I love how surfing makes me feel! I know that seems like a random comment, but it isn't. I just got out of the water when I see two very familiar faces - a black-haired woman and a dark-haired man looking into the water. I make my way over to them; I guess curiousity really did kill the cat! As I get closer the two people get more and more familiar,but crazily enough I still can’t put my finger on it! It’s kinda like Ruby when she tries to answer an algebra question in class. “It’s on the tip of my tongue!” She tells me that every maths class we have together. Anyway, back to the familiar people; the woman speaks, and suddenly I know who the two people are! I really can’t believe this and neither will you… but trust me on this one. I am kinda hesitant to call out their names; just in case they don’t want to speak to anyone. Finally my courage has built up enough for me to be able to speak. “Martha, Hugo?” Martha smiles and waves and Hugo, being Hugo just stands there and stares. “Xav! Long-time no see hey!” Martha announces excitedly. I nod my head. “It sure has!”
Red Ranger 1 Posted July 23, 2012 Report Posted July 23, 2012 Woah at Martha and Hugo being back!Intrigued to see where you take this.
Charlie&Brax_lover Posted July 24, 2012 Report Posted July 24, 2012 Great chapter! Hope April and Dex can work things out and get back together. Interesting to see Martha and Hugo back, wonder what that brings? Very intrigued to find out what else is in store for this story. Please update again soon.
Phoebe Posted August 29, 2012 Report Posted August 29, 2012 I have a new proof-reader! QA will now be proofing my fic!
--HAA Posted September 4, 2012 Report Posted September 4, 2012 Oh wow, Martha & Hugo are back? Im very interested to see what you do there! And, I really hope Dex and April get back together. Cant wait for next update.
Phoebe Posted September 24, 2012 Report Posted September 24, 2012 I have just sent QA the next chapter! So sorry for the wait!
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