Allways-smiling Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Love it, love it, love it ! Update soon! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elikell Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Wow, very good twist! Teagan and Grant. Felt so sorry for Teagan for witnessing something so horrible. And for Charlie of course! Very well written. Can't wait to see where you take this. Update soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 3, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 Feeling sorry for Tegan. But very sensitively approached & you wrote that well. Well done. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
totally Posted August 3, 2011 Report Share Posted August 3, 2011 All I can say... Waw! That last chapter was so great, this story keeps getting better and better. I would really like to read more of that! Thank you so much! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teespazzr Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 I'm Really getting into this FF! I'm loving it! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 I somehow missed the last two chapters but Oh my god!! Grant is Teagan's half brother?? And I'm assuming it was a younger Charlie who was getting abused by him. Great twist, but oh my god I'm still in shock. Like that Brax feels all protective for her. Glad that Grant got bashed (assuming it was either Brax or Heath who did it) he definitely had it coming. Awesome two chapters, more soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel90 Posted August 4, 2011 Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Just started to read this fic... Loving it... Great job... Thes chapter are amazingly written... Awww i like how you made Grat Tegans brother... Brax really has a heart... Like how he keeps thinking about the girl who got raped.. He doesnt seem to like Tegan too much does he...? Is Charlie guna be the girl who hot raped by him...? Sorry i know its long but had a lot of chapters to catch up on Update soon plz Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HighwayUnicorn Posted August 4, 2011 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2011 Wow ... another great chapter. Brilliantly written & I look forward to seeing where you take it. Love Carina xxx Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soph1303 Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Great chapter. Casey and Rocco Cooper being friends? Very interesting. I love how you've integrated all the characters in this story. Poor Teagan, I actually for once do feel sorry her. So sad that she didn't get to see her mum one last time. I liked this bit in particular - "Brax had to admit, getting over Teagan had been a fairly easy task and he had moved on and had one or two relationships in the last eighteen months, but he did miss her. Grant was gone and there was no danger for her, and Brax pitied the poor girl, who had lost so much. His care for her was purely platonic and he was glad to have his fears and worries put aside, knowing that she was finally home and alright." Yes Braxy, Charlie is the only girl for you - ever!! You just have to wait a while. More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arielxo Posted August 5, 2011 Report Share Posted August 5, 2011 Fantastic update as usual!(: So im thinking thats when Darcy was conceived - so Heath will turn out to be the father? I love baby Casey, he just sounds sooo cute. More soon please Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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