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Cally!! I was looking for an excuse to not start revising and I came on here and saw I had missed an update :D:D You have no idea how happy that made me!!

Anyway, loved this update, Angelo is so sweet :wub: I hope Charlie does call him while he's away cos I'm sure he'll be thinking about her all day! Martha :angry: I really don't like her! I'm glad Jack is standing up to her and telling her to wise up, but I do hope they can sort their problems out. I hope Martha doesn't give in and read the file, cos she'd change her attitude to Charlie, and it would be better if she just stopped judging her and tried to get to know her properly.

Loving this! Update soon please :D

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LOVED this !!!!!

I especially liked ……

1. the chat tween Rubes & Morag that incl this …

“I thought me telling people was hard, I can’t even imagine how hard it will be for mum” Ruby replied as she sat at the table

“What do you mean ‘telling people was hard’?” Morag asked as she stopped putting the chocolate powder in the cup

“I told some friends about Matt and what he did to mum and me and what he took from us” Ruby replied, slightly regretting having told them.

“I hope you know what you are doing Ruby. Not another repeat of Lacey, Robbie and Harriet”

You mean Stacey, Toby and Hannah” Ruby replied

2. This exchange tween Angelo & Morag

“I can’t leave Morag; I’m involved in this now”

“Oh? And how exactly are you involved?” Morag asked

“Charlie told me about Ruby’s biological father; and how Matt left”

“Did she tell you everything to do with Matt?” Angelo shook his head “Then you’re not involved. It’s messy and a very delicate situation Angelo, I know you mean well; god knows I do after the Kelly mess up-“

3. At least Martha has a reason for the way she is behaving with Charlie

“I just don’t get why, Charlie can get herself pregnant at fourteen and have people feeling sorry for her, and I have a pregnancy SCARE at sixteen and I’m called a tramp”

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Great update Cally :D

Hopefully Morag is right and Charlie will talk to Leah about stuff because she really needs too, I think. Bottling everything up is doing her no good at all! Mr Lowis.....at first I thought it was Matt looking for Charlie and Ruby, but then Angelo said he hadn't seen the people in the picture, but I guess maybe he just said that to protect them cos he knows how Charlie feels about him. Hmm. Intriguing!

Update soon :D

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Great update Cally :D

Hopefully Morag is right and Charlie will talk to Leah about stuff because she really needs too, I think. Bottling everything up is doing her no good at all! Mr Lowis.....at first I thought it was Matt looking for Charlie and Ruby, but then Angelo said he hadn't seen the people in the picture, but I guess maybe he just said that to protect them cos he knows how Charlie feels about him. Hmm. Intriguing!

Update soon :D

Elementary!

lol. should be a detective Danni! :lol:

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Wow, you write such long updates that I have to read some of it & then take a break to make myself a cuppa tea sometimes (no complaints though).

Hmmm, that was very interesting with Mr Lowis. I don't know whether or not to be concerned for Charlie & Ruby's safety at the moment ...

Another amazingly written chapter, beautiful characterisation. Well done & I look forward to more.

Love Carina xxx :wub:

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