Lilone Posted May 4, 2007 Report Posted May 4, 2007 OMFG That was awesome Ali, I loved it The writing was..... just amazing, gets better after every fic! Quote
~Amy~ Posted May 4, 2007 Report Posted May 4, 2007 (edited) Oh, Alli that was just perfect! And you posted yesterday?!! Always the last to know... Anyhow, the writing was superb! (as I knew it would be). This isn't going to stop my Lete obsession, you do know that? Its stronger that ever. But not five minutes had gone by since he and Leah had kissed that he hadn’t thought about her, and how much he wanted to be with her. Aw! See this is how it should have gone, not him ending up with Mandy! They could have been the bay's next hottest couple! Imagine it, there'd be the big drama over her cheating, they'd have to stay in to avoid the gossip and comfort each other. ! Totally loved it! More Lete fics? Yes? Edited May 4, 2007 by ~Amy~ Quote
allibaz91 Posted May 4, 2007 Report Posted May 4, 2007 ^Bully much?? Be grateful for one - next thing I know you'll join Lil's sequel campaign!! Glad you liked it Amy and Lil Quote
Eli Posted May 4, 2007 Report Posted May 4, 2007 Oh my God, that was so awesome! I really really loved the way you switched between Leah and Peter's point of view in every paragraph. I also liked the way you split up the text by adding song lyrics between all the paragraphs. BTW, the song was PERFECT! Really awesome fic, totally dragging me in and making me forget about everything else. Quote
*~Abi~* Posted May 5, 2007 Report Posted May 5, 2007 I agree a great choice of song and what a great fic , can just imagine pete and leah thinking those things as the story panned out wicked one shot Quote
Traceve Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 That was so cute! Eeee! Lete Great writing Ali, could picture each scene in my head. Quote
swfc Posted May 6, 2007 Report Posted May 6, 2007 That was seriously wow. It was fantastic. Not really a Lete fan but wow... It was so believeable that I actually really saw it happening. I agree with Shannon. That whole scene played in my head and somehow, I could just hear the music in the background as well. Must also agree with Eli in that I loved how the scene changes between the point of view of Peter and Leah. The whole fic flowed very well. It was really fantastic. Maybe you should try a career change, Alli. Quote
Lilone Posted May 7, 2007 Author Report Posted May 7, 2007 I feel so sorry for Dan But apart from that, its amazing Glad you took our advice update soon Quote
swfc Posted May 8, 2007 Report Posted May 8, 2007 Lol, yes, we're supposed to be taking over the world. Scratch that idea of a career change. I would like to say a huge thank you to Apples and Lil. And, that was awesome. I feel so sorry for Dan right now. Poor guy.... He's going to hate his brother so much. Anyway, update soon. I'm not complaining altho I spy a line or two of Clete's in there somewhere.... You have some explaining to do, Alli. Using Clete's lines. Quote
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