Tear Up the Sky (by Jen) - comments

[Georgia]

That was really, really sweet (despite the fact that it should be creepy because it's Aden and Annie )

I'm actually speechless right now, and that doesn't happen often.

I think that was perfect Jen

[twinkletoesjess]

What a great idea for a story. If this is the kind of stories you come up with whilst H&A is on hiatus then i am all for a longer break . You did a great job writing a couple that should have seemed wrong but it didnt. Adens reaction to finding Annie Hot made me laugh. I loved it.

[Red Ranger 1]

Aden and Annie.Aden and Annie.That is just so, so brilliant.It felt exactly right and you handled the whole idea perfectly.I can actually really imagine this happening...many years down the track(or...not that many?), it's completely in character.Loved it!

[idris]

This is a lovely short story, and I really could imagine Annie as a good school teacher (shades of Sally?) Hope Aden leaves his job at the fish market though