kristie1024 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Awww, that was so cute and sad. It was really emotional. And even though I'm not a massive fan of Aden and Belle. I really liked them together in the story. And I loved when Irene was talking to her it was a really nice scene. I really enjoyed this, it was really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
amz89 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 wow i loved that so teary beautiful, i so loved it awesome i could so visualise that.. Well done. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taniya_K Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 That was just so sad. But so brilliantly written too, I could actually visualise it. The letter that Belle wrote was sad, but I'm glad she did. Aden's reaction, and everyone else's, were excellent and so real, which just made it sadder. Great oneshot! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
matticus01 Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 *sob* I dont know what else to say just beautiful Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lise Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 That was beautiful! Very sad but still beautiful. You almost have me in tears. It was amazingly written. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
**Julie** Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Wow. That was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. A brilliantly written one shot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pollymoon Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Wow. That was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. A brilliantly written one shot. Great story, really sad but really beautiful, would love to see a follow on to see how Aden copes?? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jody Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 (edited) This was amazing. I enjoyed every second of it. Aden and Belle's reaction to the news that she was going to die was done so well and was definitely my favourite parts. It was pretty realistic. Aden leaving like that was sad but for once I liked him storming out. You could feel the emotion there. I'm glad that you had Belle breakdown, about all things she would miss and being to young to die, and let everything out like anyone would do in that situation instead of staying strong and being brave for the sake of everyone. Felt more real that way. Belle and Irene's speeches to each other was beautiful. Sweet but not to overdone, which I liked. I didn't even mind Belle calling Irene 'mum' because atleast she acknowledged Amanda and the fact she loved her but it was Irene who truly looked after her. Like Belle and Irene's, Belle and Aden's speeches to each other was also done really well. No big words or anything too profound, just them simply expressing how they felt about each other one last time. The letter was a nice touch and sounds like something Belle would do. Brilliant oneshot. There was nothing I didn't love about it. You are definitely a talented writer. Edited May 22, 2009 by Jody Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taylor438 Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I agree with everyone else. They lay together on the bed with their little daughter placed on top of them. It was the perfect moment ever, even though it was going to be shattered apart in a few minutes it would be one of the final and amazing moments that ever happened in Belle’s life. that part was so sad it made me cry Fantastic Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symphony Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 this was very moving - really well written, i could picture it all playing out too! write more one shots? or long fics? [puppy dog eyes] - Symphony Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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