Deborah Posted October 27, 2008 Report Posted October 27, 2008 Awww, that was so beautifully written! Had me in tears. Quote
meant2live Posted October 27, 2008 Report Posted October 27, 2008 Thank you very much, glad you enjoyed Deborah. Quote
whispered_envy Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 That was beautifully written. I could really identify with Matilda's sadness. Wonderful oneshot. Quote
meant2live Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 Thank you whispered evny... glad you liked it. Thank you for the positive fedback guys, its much appreciated Quote
Jen Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 Your oneshots are amazing. You really capture the emotion and establish the characters in such a short space of time. Very moving. “I love you mum.” She whispered softly, barely above human hearing level as the tears streamed down her face, never once easing up. She didn’t need to speak loudly, there was no one there to hear. Just a body on a slab. “I’ll miss you.” She knew there was no point wiping her tears away, because they would be replaced by new ones as soon as she moved her hand away. ^ Simply loved this bit. So well written and heartbreaking. Quote
meant2live Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 Thank you Jen. I just find oneshots easier to write and they seem to be doing their job lol Glad you like it, and yeah that bit was one of favourite bits as well. Quote
matticus01 Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 That was...................... Beautiful... so emotional, raw The way you wrote everything almost had me in tears and not many fic's do that very often Great writing Quote
meant2live Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 Thank you Matticus. Glad you liked it You know I've noticed that I keep saying thank you and glad you liked it when everyone keeps saying it made them cry or almost cry... hmmm I hope its a good thing lol. But yeah thank you for reading it and for the feedback Quote
Lustre Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 That was simply beautiful, from her disbelief to her acceptances and the realisation that this was her final moment with her mother, your writing is beautiful. You made her grief tangible. Quote
meant2live Posted October 28, 2008 Report Posted October 28, 2008 Thank you Lustre... glad you thought it was beautiful. And tangible... i haven't heard that word since i was at 6th form 3 years ago lol... my teacher always used that word... i miss that word lol Quote
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