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The Angels Will Look After You (by meant2live) - comments


Deborah
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Your oneshots are amazing. You really capture the emotion and establish the characters in such a short space of time. Very moving.

“I love you mum.” She whispered softly, barely above human hearing level as the tears streamed down her face, never once easing up. She didn’t need to speak loudly, there was no one there to hear. Just a body on a slab. “I’ll miss you.” She knew there was no point wiping her tears away, because they would be replaced by new ones as soon as she moved her hand away.

^ Simply loved this bit. So well written and heartbreaking.

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