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Little did Senior Detective Tracey Thompson know is that the following night she would return in search of her - like an addict hooked on drugs.

I loved that whole sentence and in particular the reference to the drugs. It was very suiting.

Friday the 25th of November 2005 was the night she no longer locked up the dangerous to protect society, but instead would become one of them.

I reckon this was a very good ending. I loved it. So simple yet so explanatory....

Another fic written really well, Andy. Altho, I must say, you've used your favourite word in all 3 of your most recent fics.

But, I loved this one. It was short but very self explantory. A job well done, Andy. :)

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