Zetti Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 Very good Best part was this SARAH: Sorry, I was supposed to be all sophisticated when we met. FELIX: A little hard to do that when your mouth is full of chocolate. SARAH: Oh, it's great, do you want some? FELIX: Sure. He wiped the piece of chocolate off her bottm lip. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Amy. Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 I liked it, an interesting assumption of how they met! Great work, wish it wasn't a one-shot though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cerise Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 That was brilliant SARAH: You just don't look like the sort of guy who likes to meet teenage girls over the internet. FELIX: I'm only 21, it's not that bad. SARAH: Well, I'm 14, it looks bad. They smiled. Ah the age difference. That part made me smile too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Amy~ Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 (edited) Felix is a dude?! I just assumed..... Anyway great writing Cal, I loved it! A much prettier side to Sarah, I gotta say. "Lensman319: Tease.", I giggled over that, very creative names too. Hope you write more one-shots 'coz I, for one would love to read them. Edited April 6, 2007 by ~Amy~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sarah_Lewis Posted April 6, 2007 Report Share Posted April 6, 2007 That was awesome Cal, wish it wasn't a oneshot though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 OMG! I love this! And Felix looks so much like Jeff! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 Thanks, Everybody! OMG! I love this! And Felix looks so much like Jeff! It's quite freaky how alike they look. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 Dude, I know! ... That cake scene has made me hungry now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cal Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 Hehe... Cake at 7 in the moring. >.< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Share Posted April 7, 2007 I ate jelly and icecream at 5 in the morning once (and I wasn't even a kid, that was last month). Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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