Zetti Posted April 6, 2007 Report Posted April 6, 2007 Very good Best part was this SARAH: Sorry, I was supposed to be all sophisticated when we met. FELIX: A little hard to do that when your mouth is full of chocolate. SARAH: Oh, it's great, do you want some? FELIX: Sure. He wiped the piece of chocolate off her bottm lip. Quote
.Amy. Posted April 6, 2007 Report Posted April 6, 2007 I liked it, an interesting assumption of how they met! Great work, wish it wasn't a one-shot though. Quote
Cerise Posted April 6, 2007 Report Posted April 6, 2007 That was brilliant SARAH: You just don't look like the sort of guy who likes to meet teenage girls over the internet. FELIX: I'm only 21, it's not that bad. SARAH: Well, I'm 14, it looks bad. They smiled. Ah the age difference. That part made me smile too Quote
~Amy~ Posted April 6, 2007 Report Posted April 6, 2007 (edited) Felix is a dude?! I just assumed..... Anyway great writing Cal, I loved it! A much prettier side to Sarah, I gotta say. "Lensman319: Tease.", I giggled over that, very creative names too. Hope you write more one-shots 'coz I, for one would love to read them. Edited April 6, 2007 by ~Amy~ Quote
Sarah_Lewis Posted April 6, 2007 Report Posted April 6, 2007 That was awesome Cal, wish it wasn't a oneshot though Quote
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 OMG! I love this! And Felix looks so much like Jeff! Quote
Cal Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 Thanks, Everybody! OMG! I love this! And Felix looks so much like Jeff! It's quite freaky how alike they look. Quote
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 Dude, I know! ... That cake scene has made me hungry now. Quote
Oxidizer Posted April 7, 2007 Report Posted April 7, 2007 I ate jelly and icecream at 5 in the morning once (and I wasn't even a kid, that was last month). Quote
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