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  swfc said:
DB... He's such a funny guy. Wonder what song he's listening too. Imagine if Ada walked in on him lip syching and dancing to some cheesy pop song? Now that would've been classic.

Now you tell me!? lol I could have done that! :P

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At least she didn't give Averyl her pink jumper as a goodbye gift

Dammet, I should have done that to, we both know how much Averly likes that jumper! :wink:

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Lol hello, ever hear of long distance?!?! Work with me here, Shan!!
:lol::lol:

Thanks you Two! :D

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“You’re leaving?” he asked her. She nodded sadly. She had always been closer to her father then her mother, but it felt wrong to let him go by himself.

“Can’t you stay?” he asked her. The Security guard came up behind him puffing and panting.

“I thought I told you to stop mate?” he asked him grabbing his arm.

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Now you tell me!? lol I could have done that! :P

Well, I'm sorry... It didn't occur to me at that time. Lol....

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Dammet, I should have done that to, we both know how much Averly likes that jumper! :wink:

Heehee.... I'm evil, aren't I? Yeah, she really does love that jumper.

  Traceve said:
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“You’re leaving?” he asked her. She nodded sadly. She had always been closer to her father then her mother, but it felt wrong to let him go by himself.

“Can’t you stay?” he asked her. The Security guard came up behind him puffing and panting.

“I thought I told you to stop mate?” he asked him grabbing his arm.

Aww, that's just so sad.... Lol, it's like in a movie.... Nice to see Bobby going after the girl.

  Traceve said:
Yeah it is to do with Averyl. My proofie is in bed at the moment :P So tommrow :)

Sleeping on the job? Tut tut... that's really bad.... :P I'm guessing your proofie should be awake by now, don't you think? Update soon.

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Great chapter Shan! For a moment there I really thought Averyl was going to stay...

Aww can we have Jack and Martha in the next one? Pleeeeeeeeease *smiles sweetly* As Chris and Amy are having relationship problems, I think we should have a happy couple on the scene at the same time :P

Update soon, can't wait for more :)

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