sxc_detective_baker Posted March 4, 2006 Report Share Posted March 4, 2006 Me and Des are going to write a fan fic together and I have posted the 1st four days in summaries. We need to know what you think else their is no point of us writing. Please post comments. I will be writing the first part then des will do the next etc..... Please reply soon 1st episode All the town gathers to celebrate someones 23rd birthday. Whilst Ric and Matilda get closer. 2nd episode The un expected happened on the boat!! Who will survive? 3rd episode Peter returns to the bay but finds........ Will lucas ever find out what happened before the explosion? 4th episode The towns people grieve for their loved ones. In a very emotional funeral Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted March 4, 2006 Report Share Posted March 4, 2006 sounds awesome cant wait to read it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skykat Posted March 4, 2006 Report Share Posted March 4, 2006 Sounds promising, look forward to see where you go with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sxc_detective_baker Posted March 4, 2006 Report Share Posted March 4, 2006 (Noah's bar) Sally enters with Ric talking about a suprise party but change the subject when they see Martha walking towards them. Ric says 'hello' to Martha. Martha replies by saying 'sorry mate gotta go meet Jack!' Sally and Ric continue talking about a surprise birthday party that is planned for tomorrow night. Alf spots Ric and Sally and shouts them over to the store cupboard. Alf says 'Martha has no idea that her she has got a party planned for her 23rd' 'everyone is meeting on the Boat at 7:00pm and Jack is bringing Martha around 8:00pm' says Ric. they all exit the store cupboard. Ric goes to play snooker when he spots Maddie walking in. Ric says to maddie 'Wanna play?' Maddie says 'sure but im going to win'. Ric laughs and starts the game. Maddie takes her first shot and knocks her balls in one by one going on to the black ball to win the game. Ric looks at maddie in shock saying 'Wow you are good'. Ric decides he wants a walk so they head out of the noah's and go for a walk. Whilst there walking Ric talks about he first came to the bay and how maddie helped him through the rough times. Maddie then says 'Yeah the good old days aye Ric'. They carry on talking for about 15 minutes until they come to a cliff and stand looking at the sea. Maddie drops her money on the floor and goes to pick it up and so does Ric. They look in to each others eyes until Maddie thinks of Lucas and looks away from Ric. They both stand up and start to walk home. Things are strange between them on the way home because Maddie and Ric know that there is something their. Ric walks Maddie home then hugs her goodbye. Ric heads to his house but all he can think about is Maddie. Maddie walks in home acting really strange towards Lucas. Lucas asks maddie 'Whats wrong babe' Maddie says 'Babe im just tired'. Maddie heads off in to her room to go sleep. Not even giving Lucas a kiss good night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prancer Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 (Noah's bar) Sally enters with Ric talking about a suprise party but change the subject when they see Martha walking towards them. Ric says 'hello' to Martha. Martha replies by saying 'sorry mate gotta go meet Jack!' Sally and Ric continue talking about a surprise birthday party that is planned for tomorrow night. Alf spots Ric and Sally and shouts them over to the store cupboard. Alf says 'Martha has no idea that her she has got a party planned for her 23rd' 'everyone is meeting on the Boat at 7:00pm and Jack is bringing Martha around 8:00pm' says Ric. they all exit the store cupboard. Ric goes to play snooker when he spots Maddie walking in. Ric says to maddie 'Wanna play?' Maddie says 'sure but im going to win'. Ric laughs and starts the game. Maddie takes her first shot and knocks her balls in one by one going on to the black ball to win the game. Ric looks at maddie in shock saying 'Wow you are good'. Ric decides he wants a walk so they head out of the noah's and go for a walk. Whilst there walking Ric talks about he first came to the bay and how maddie helped him through the rough times. Maddie then says 'Yeah the good old days aye Ric'. They carry on talking for about 15 minutes until they come to a cliff and stand looking at the sea. Maddie drops her money on the floor and goes to pick it up and so does Ric. They look in to each others eyes until Maddie thinks of Lucas and looks away from Ric. They both stand up and start to walk home. Things are strange between them on the way home because Maddie and Ric know that there is something their. Ric walks Maddie home then hugs her goodbye. Ric heads to his house but all he can think about is Maddie. Maddie walks in home acting really strange towards Lucas. Lucas asks maddie 'Whats wrong babe' Maddie says 'Babe im just tired'. Maddie heads off in to her room to go sleep. Not even giving Lucas a kiss good night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
prancer Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 it is good!!!!!!!!!write more soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martha&Jack Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 Cant wait to read more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Tess- Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 awesome! Please..more soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-lolly- Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 wow thats really good!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
*dW* Posted March 5, 2006 Report Share Posted March 5, 2006 I think i have to write part 2:P im so into writing my believers aswell part 3 for that story will be done soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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