Eli

Well, I'm proofing this, but I thought I'd drop by and comment anyway, it's nice reading a fic without looking for things and instead sit back and enjoy it for what it is. I can't wait to see where you are going with this, it's very intruiging to find out what happened to Sally that would make her decide never to go back to Summer Bay (even though she is)

I really like these, the blurry effect in the Mattie/Lucas ones are really nice, they give a good effect to the icon. I also like your colouring and the cropping in the last two ones

Hi, could you add a rating (and warnings if needed) to this fic? Official ratings guide Thanks

You do that I think this might be my last oneshot for a while, at least when it comes to G/L. I'm still working on reposting my long G/L fic. It might happen. Soon.

First of all: I feel guilty for not getting back to you about the last draft of the first chapter of that other fic yet. You should never trust me when I say I'm gonna do something by a certain date. So sorry, I will do it very soon! Now: this fic. I really enjoyed reading this, you really described the feelings well and made it very easy to understand how they both feel. She glanced across the room to where he sat. To somebody who didn’t know him, he looked completely at ease, his long legs stretched out under the table, his broad shoulders slouched back comfortably, relaxed against the hard wood chair. So relaxed, so leisurely and unhurried, that the paper he scanned could have been a sports paper or car magazine, even some random advertising leaflet. Probably my favourite paragraph, amazingly well written!

Thanks Jen and Zetti, I'm glad you like it And Jen, it's a good thing you'll be there, that way you can give him a shoulder to cry on when he misses (certain people) home. Just don't forget him to go back to SB every now and then to visit old "friends", and don't fall in love with him, you'll just end up heartbroken when he gets back together with Geoff Damn, I'm far too much in love with this ship!

Now this would be a JM storyline I could enjoy! I usually don't read JM fics, but I like this one! Mwahahaha! *evil laughter* No, seriously, it's really well written, I can picture it actually happening on H&A. Most fics I don't do that (they're well written, it's not that!) and I found the conversations very believeable. Also the lyrics (even though I have never heard the song) was perfect for the fic! I love it when I find lyrics that just fit perfectly into a fic I'm writing

Thanks you guys! Marieh - Yeah, I really love that song! It's his best song in my opinion. emmasi - Lincoln Lewis does cry in a very convincing way valli - Hey, another Norwegian I didn't know about! Yay!

Thanks guys, I really appreciate the comments, they mean a lot!

Does anyone know when this happened? Episode number? Year?

Yep, he mentions what's going on with Seb, Marilyn and June (?).

You better, I loved that fic!

Wow, that was really well written! Didn't you write a fic some time ago about Flynn's death that I really liked? Well, if that was you then you really are good at writing about things like that, and if it wasn't you... well, then I feel stupid. Anyway, I really like how you got the Beth-storyline to be about Mattie's bulimia, I never really thought the bulimia storyline was as great as it had the potential to be. I also like how you describe Mattie trashing her own room to make it as messy and chaotic as her feelings, that part was the best IMO.

I love this, the effect is really cool! I also really like the Indi/Char avs

Awww, poor Lucas! I always thought they kind of forgot him when Beth died, so it was really nice reading this

Thanks Jen, I'm glad you liked it LOL! I'll do my best to complete it next week when I have fall break

Thanks Zetti Of course I'm interested Hehe, we'll see. Maybe I'll repost it, maybe not

Thanks

Thanks all three of you I have a long fic I wrote this summer, but I deleted it after posting a few chapters, cause there was a few things I wanted to change, plus I wasn't really done with the ending. I might post it again later when I'm done with the ending, if anyone is interested of course.