Tasha

wow, a lot happened in those 4 chapters. Great fic though. Jack is superman. Please update soon

I just had a thought. Is Jack about to die, and Martha is calling him to cross-over?? That'll be so sad, but so sweet in the sense that Jack and Martha can be together forever

Dont you mean, You and Jack are meant to be. A match made in heaven...Martha and Carl are not a match made in heaven, Jack and Martha are. But yay, im so excited, the baby is Jack's Great chapter. And why wouldnt you want a baby with Jack, just look how hot he is, and Marthas gorgeous too, so they'll def have the hottest kids on the block. Now all Martha has to do is stop being stubborn and admit that she still loved Jack Great chapter though Please update soon

I knew she was pregnant. OMG but its even better 'cause the baby could be Jacks. I cant believe Jack and Martha slept together while she is engaged to Carl, not that im complaining or anything, that just makes the story even better Great chapter. Lets just all hope that this baby is Jacks Please update soon

Awwww...you were on a role with happy chapters, then you made a sad, yet wonderfully beautiful chapter. That last paragraph was beautiful. Jack and Marthas love was so strong that he still remembers her 50 years on Lovely. Please update soon

lol great chapter. Poor Martha, i can imagine how horrible that dream could of been Love her reason to be cranky, a bit like the show. But its great. Jack better not break his promises in this fic like he does in the show. Love it though Please update soon

Yaaaay. so we'll get an update before the end of the day??

^^ What she said. And please dont let Martha's thing be something like she's pregnant 'cause then Jack wont tell her and she'll never know and then they wont get back together and then i'll cry. Ok im getting ahead of myself, but you better not make her pregnant. Great couple of chapters though. Jack is so cute, picking out the best outfit to wear. Jack and Marthas relationship in this fic is like Will and Graces, in the tv show, except that Jack isnt gay But they like do everything together and yeh. Martha is so sweet in that she didnt care what Carl said, she just wanted to see Jack. Cant wait for more Please update soon

Awww...that was so sweet. I loved it. 50 years on, thats a huge jump. But its great. Will there be more?? Oh and what happened to Lara, she seemed to of disappeared after 50yrs since Martha passed Please udpate soon

cinemas- Hookwinked (havent watched a movie at the cinemas all term) oh wait, i saw an indian movie in august at the cinemas, i guess that counts, but i dont care about indian movies tv- George of the Jungle 2- great movie, very stupid but funny

haha...i think ive grown to understand how you write your fan fics

Great chapter. Love Jack and his shopping. His going to be a great dad. Cant wait for the next chapter, a cranky Martha. Love it PLease update soon

Jacks safe *dances* Im so happy. My day has been made, not really but yeh. Im glad his alive. And now he can run to Martha and they can kiss and make up. But im guessing at the end of the next chapter it'll be of when Jack and Martha just start to talk, so you'll make us wait another chapter for them to profess the undying love for each other. You seem to like leaving us in suspense, or with cliffhangers Great chapter though Please update soon

Awww...Mia is so cute. Jack and Fitzy, meh! As long as its not someone else, *cough* Tasha *cough* then im happy But poor them, not being able to love the other as much as they loved Martha and the other police fellow But if their happy, and the kids are happy, i guess im happy too. Chapters are starting to lighten up, and arent as sad no more, so im loving it even more Please update soon

Awww...poor Jack. That brough a tear to my eye. Just tell her how you feel, and she'll run back to you with open arms Great chapter though. Loving it Please update soon

OMG Henry has Martha. Martha what have you gotten youself into girlie. Poor Jack. I hope Tasha is alright. And shes pregnant Poor Martha and Jack *cries* Good chapter Please update soon

awww...10 years on...and Jack is still single. I'll be your gf Jack Kidding. I hope he'll find someone, not to replace Martha, 'cause no-one can ever replace Martha, but yeh, i guess he needs someone. Cant wait for more Please update soon

Awwww...that was great. So sad. Im going to cry again. Please udpate soon

Great chapter. Loving it so far. Martha is going to have a blow at him isnt she?? Poor Jack and Martha. Please update soon

OMG Poor Jacky boy. He cant be best man, though it is known for the best man and the bride to hook up before the wedding Well lets just hope that in this fic thats exactly what happens Jack and Martha forever, Martha and Carl, NEVER! Great chapter though. Loving this fic Please update soon

Yay, their moving in together Good on Martha Great chapter though as alwayz. PLease update soon

*cries* Please dont hurt Jack. He has so much to live for. He has Martha back. Im so sad now But great chapter. Tony and Lucas are awesome. Poor Martha Please update soon

awww...im gonna cry *cries* once again great chapter. Please update soon

Great chapter as alwayz. Poor Martha. Bye Macca, will miss him. Jack is sweet as alwayz. Baby Pippa was so cute *awwww* Please udpate soon